Awesome chapter, especially love the conversation between Hollow Rukia and Grimmjow. I know I said this a bunch of times already but the inner hollow was severely underutilized in Canon.

I. LOVE. IT! This is a brilliant fic about Rukia and only Rukia. It’s about adventure and action, not romance (it always spices everything up, but Rukia is much more than that). Also, I noticed that Uryu was with Rukia and Renji in the main characters of this fic (in ffn’s description-place thingy.) Will that mean something bigger in the future?

The fight was short and sweet.

as I read my own comment bellow... I noticed there is not a few...but A LOT of grammartical error... helpmy english teacher would kill me if he read that

i cant wait for the fight. when one of themi assumpted that ichigo will be the one, or byakuya is good either (considering what happenned with the two of them beforeto fight with the ninth espada (kaien XD). i am a fan of byakuya and your version of him makes him even better. (I dont know how you can make my favourite character and makes him even likeable)

ur work gives me life, really, maybe we are world apart so this fanfic was updated every monday and i notice that u said u
updated it every sunday (that confirmed the difference of time zone)

So back to my point, monday sucks, a lot of school related work and sucky teacher, and ur this piece of art cheered me up every my most detestable day so thankyou, really.

i have never really leave a comment on this site (but your work tempted me to) and english isnt my first language so sorry if there is any grammartical error or my words came up rude or anything. so... hope u have a good day ;D

If this is trash I love it ! I've always rooted for RenjixRukia couple and this story gives me life 3 love your work

Aizen in this story as himself. Lol. Trolling as usual.
But seriously am I the only one seing chemistry between Rukia and Orihime or is it because I want to see it.

I love your Orihime. That she didn't run away after Ichigo, but actually decided to stay with Chad and help him. No "kurosaki-kun" just great:)

Dordoni not dead right? He to awesome to die! Cirucci and Gantebainne the same. Hope they all get moment to shine in this please.

And here I was thinking some cheesy yuri moments. Only in my dreams... Rukia and Orihime.. but people go with renruki ichiruki ulquihime ichihme or anything else. My heart almost melted from moment when Orihime was healing Rukia and from Rukia's pov. Sadly...
Anyway this story is super great. I have some questions, there are things not clear to me. But doesn't matter. Maybe they will be explained later?

I am beyond excited right now, where is things that always irked me about bleach but how they never really explored the implication of Ichigo having a inner Hallow beyond the need to control it. The desire to actually explore what it meant to have this inner Hollow only strengthened with the reveal of what that inner Hollow actually was.

And it looks like I'm finally getting what I wanted from bleach.

Ooooh so it will be a Renai x Rukia paring? Or just a school crush like Orihime's infatuation towards Ichigo in the manga as a typical heroine? Hmmm

D'awww, Tastsuki and Orihime's friendship is so adorable. I think yours is even better than the manga. Tastsuki just usually supports Hime when it comes to matchmaking her with Ichigo or any kind of shenanigans. I'm glad that they formed their friendship through actual bonding and school related hehe. I used to ship them so hard, but Kubo decided to toss Tastsuki away, ugh.

Your version of Orihime keeps getting better. She's determined to support and protect people she cares about which clearly lacks from the canon; whether from a battle or just any normal situations. The canon Orihime was just all talk, but no actions... which makes me sigh everytime I read her depressing monologues lol.

You sir/mam have a faithful reader.

Personally, no one can beat the SS arc. You did a great from the action/fight scenes. Rukia getting out of control during her Bankai was expected, and it was a nice touch to show it from one character's point of view.

My only disappoinments are the lack of impact of Ichigo and Rukia's relationship since they are the ones that made Bleach... Bleach. I think the two didn't have enough closure hence your version of Soul Society arc was lacking. In the canon, Ichigo was adamant and motivated to save Rukia. It made us readers feel connected to his determination and his will to save her.

Rukia's intent on saving him along with the others didn't made me root for them. It just felt a brand adventure to finish with some mishaps to fix rather than an important mission of saving someone dear to them. Overall, you still manage to make great developments and interactions with the other characters. I just personally think that I couldn't find that special charm of Ichigo and Rukia's bond in here.