seriouslyy the best naruto tayuya story ever lmfao... serious props dude, or dudette. Honestly thhis shit shoouuld have been cannon. Hinata is a lame...

"i fucked him" oh god hahaha really made me laugh out of nowhere

I wanted to read this, I really did. But it turned out one of those stories where the author completely overestimated the power the Hokage has over Shinobis daily lives and that's just a lazy writing device to deal with ideas writers aren't willing to work more on. The first chapter handled things horrifically lazy and I'm just not willing to read a story that's entirely plot is based on a decision no Naruto would ever make and an author once again not understanding the power of the Hokage.

I would love it if you add another character for fluffed it more. Great read by the way!

My god what a ride. I loved it to bits especially with the way you didn't drag out fight scenes needlessly. I would love to see more fluffy epilogues but I'm quite content with what we've got.

Man fuck you. I motherfucking cried. With Tayuya maybe probably dead, possibly Naruto, Kurama and Tayuya dead, I cried man. Then, the possibility of them all being in genjutsu? Im scared

I though I would hate a bitter naruto but the concept of this story is good. I like you your writing style and the flow of the story. I hope the rest is as good as chapter one.

The best Naruto x Tayuya I've read till date.

This was probably one of the MOST BADASS fanfics I've read in awhile, very few what the bick did I just read moments, even had people looking at me strange when I just randomly started laughing like I heard a damn good joke. Thank you for the story. Especially loved the pairing,

Would love more epilogue!

I am officially dead that was way to funny i was cracking up

i almost cried. amazing. love it. can't stop thinking about them. so freaking. adorable.

This was fascinating... I'd love to know if they have a boy or a nother girl... Damn good job

Having naruto getting talked like that just bothered me too much ... it’s like he makes a comeback from the argument just to get shot back down it’s really irritating

Hey,
I first read this like half a year ago, saw it the day before yesterday marked as completed and just couldn't stop reading. THIS IS AWESOME. I mean i would have loved it even more if Naruto had managed to snag Ino too, to make some blonde kids (and because she totally doesnt fit with Sai) but this still is one of the best fanfics on here. So thanks for that Random Internet stranger... Also i get tge reference from your name. Sadly stopped playing like last year, shame because i almost was vainglorious too.
Anyway have a good one and ill gladly take some more epilogue fluff. Or an equally good NaruInoYuya story ;) you know in case you need a new idea.
Have a good one.
Regards,
Reaper