Nice crossover! I would recommend putting a bit more meat in the paragraphs.

Cool crossover! I notice the date is a bit past, But I hope you update soon. While the chapter is a bit flawed, I don't think it needs a refresh. Continue!

Ooh! I hope the other Ddlc characters show up!

Oh, heck yeah! I hope the other girls from the Lituratyre club appear too!

Thank you guys for the amazing reviews, I’ll update soon!
And, EllaBella, May I use that idea? I absolutely love it!

I have an idea! So basically doesn't know that ayanos a psycho and while walking around the school she sees ayano killing a girl! So monika starts to realise what she's getting into! Ayano somehow manages to sneak sleeping dust into monikas bento and makes her fall asleep. She takes her into her basement and tries to put monika back into the game. It doesn't work and she escapes. Monika tries to get ayano a bad reputation by spreading rumours about her. Stamp gets mad and stalls Monika. She sees her go into sempies hose and into his computer. Ayano smashes the laptop and monika is gone for ever! She confesses her love for sempie and he... You decide! I think this is going to be an amazing story! Good luck!

This story is amazing! Great job for your first crossover! Anyways, please make a second one!

Interesting crossover. I’m looking forward to more.

I don't have too much to say here. You did a great job writing these two characters together. Grammar and spelling are impeccable, and the story flows pretty well. I would have added a bit more to Monika's introduction, and I'm pretty sure that if you saw someone who (you knew) ruined your (fictional) love life, you wouldn't be like "okay you exist now cool."

Other than that, great story! I look forward to reading more.