Reviews for Every Little Thing
Daphne Malfoy Lestrange chapter 1 . 3/20
Very good
sophia chapter 5 . 2/20
hello! i've enjoyed this fic so much! the way you write and combines Hogwarts with TATB was magical. the sheer amount of detail and craft that must've went into this- sheesh. from one writer to another, i admire the way you write :)
YadiraDRiddle chapter 5 . 12/18/2019
me encanta tu historia y mas que agregaras DRAMIONE
Guest chapter 5 . 10/8/2019
5ytds5jrytcj, fddk fyjdvy,k
I love you and your brilliant genius.

But ginny*Harry all the way
Guest chapter 5 . 8/21/2019
I absolutely love this crossover. It’s so creative and original, and I love both HP and To All the Boys I Loved Before, and I think this fic is a great combination of the both of them! Great job!
DancingBookworm719 chapter 5 . 8/3/2019
I love reading this story. You are so creative and I love how we are able to get the background story on Lara Jean and Gen as well as Lara Jean and Josh. I can’t wait to see where you go with this and to read the next chapter.
2426 chapter 5 . 7/9/2019
Wow this is amazing I came across this today and finished all five chapters. I love the combination you have done a d can't wait for the next chapters
Cinematicolour chapter 5 . 6/29/2019
Oh man, always worth the wait! So good. Again another brilliant chapter of just so perfectly subtle development between LJ and Peter. It's both frustrating cause I just wanna see the movie plot developments now... but also I don't, cause I'm loving every moment as everyone moves along!

Also now I'm very excited to see what happens with Annabelle D
amaryllis529 chapter 4 . 6/28/2019
I’m trying to not seem like a stalker since I’ve already written a review today, but if you’re running short on extras here’s one!

Name: Amaryllis (Can go by Amy)
Age: Whichever works best with plot
Description and Gender: Female, 5’3, dark hair, brown eyes
House: Gryffindor or Hufflepuff
Best Subject: Potions (I took ap chem this year so it totally counts right?!)
One Random Detail: All the females in her Wizarding family are named after flowers! (This is a legit tradition my family has irl. My legal name’s Amaryllis, but it’s really long so all my friends call me amy, my mom’s Daisy, grandma’s name is basically written in English as “york lanwhich roughly translates from Cantonese to “Orchid, and so on! )
amaryllis529 chapter 2 . 6/28/2019
I’m a big fan of your work with The Prince’s Choice series! I’m actually in the middle of rereading it but stopped check some of your other work and stumbled across this. I love how you didn’t go the stereotypical route with Laura jean with sorting her. I was a little surprised but can already tell this is gonna make an amazing and spicier story! I’m also getting some dramione undertones with the whole Gryffindor Slytherin romance and GAHHH I LOVE IT! I’m also shipper of dramione and love where you’re going with this!
NatRose17 chapter 5 . 6/27/2019
That was incredible, I don't know why but I feel this is your best chapter or you may be superb yourself more and more equally many thanks! I like the pairs, really interesting.
ElizabeththeLast chapter 5 . 6/26/2019
I really need to get better at reviewing every time you update, this fanfic is too good to not get a thousand reviews! The chapter was lovely (though it feels so funny to read about Christmas in the middle of summer), and that scene at the end was so adorable, it made my heart glow. I really like getting your interpretation of Lara Jean when she was younger. Your writing for her feels so spot on, even though you're in completely uncharted territory. Same with Peter. And the way you're building up the story to the major plot points from the original story is really fun. I'm excited to see what happens once we get there, though I know it's a long ways off and all your writing in between is very engaging. I also love how you bring in the fact that the spells are in Latin. It seems like something some Hogwarts student should have figured out, and I like that Lara Jean did.
Guest chapter 4 . 6/26/2019
NAME: Ellianna (goes by Ellie or Elle)
AGE (in relation to Lara Jean and the gang): same age
DESCRIPTION and GENDER (basic): female, brown hair, blue-green eyes, light sprinkle of freckles on nose and cheeks, is metamorphosis (ends of hair and eyes change color with emotions)
HOUSE: Ravenclaw (the sorting hat considered putting in hufflepuff but she was better suited for ravenclaw)
BEST SUBJECT: charms
ONE RANDOM DETAIL: has twin brother in slytherin

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Cinematicolour chapter 4 . 6/18/2019
Loving the updates. I just love seeing how LJ and Peter interact in this wonderful world.

Hmmmm OC's...

Annabelle
Either second year with Josh or fifth year
Female ginger with long hair (uses charms to get a permanent wave in her hair)
Hufflepuff (Sorting hat considered putting her in Slytherin or Gryffindor but she wanted Hufflepuff and it knew she'd be right there)
Probably Charms cause she puts them into a song to remember them all
I don't know... do you want more random details? xD I feel like she'd be good friends with Josh and would petition Flitwick to do more modern/muggle songs in the frog choir.
aestheticpickle chapter 3 . 6/8/2019
I love this story and storyline soooooo much! When will a new chapter be out?
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