Curious to see how this will end

I don't approve of him leaving, but he needed to get away. My heart aches for him. I wonder if you will do the second movie.

Love it! Your way of writing, your Diaval, your story,...
I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

"A twenty-year-old geezer like himself," as someone who just recently turned 20 I feel that on a spiritual level lol
I love your writing and this story!

I hope you come back to this someday! I thoroughly enjoyed the existing chapters, especially your portrayal of Diaval! He was always my favorite character in the movie.

Pls don’t let this story die

Omg please come back! This is amazing and I love every moment of this story!

Wow. This is like... good. Holy crap. Probably you'll never see this but... yeah, this is really freaking well done. Full props, and if you're ever bored enough, perhaps continue? At any rate, you have real skill, and the story was appreciated.

Thumbs up!

This is brilliant, and very original. I love this. I’m so excited to know what happens to Aurora, and if Diaval and Maleficent get there in time, and what Maleficent’s reaction will be when she finally understands what Diaval meant, and... everything else! Your writing is also phenomenal, by the way. This could easily pass for a real book.

I absolutely love this and i can't wait to read the next chapter! You write wonderfully!

So uh...there’s something wrong with the chapter, and it’s not really readable.

Love this, please continue!

That was wonderful! Absolutely wonderful! I can’t wait to see the reaction of Maleficent once she realizes Diaval is gone.