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  Bronze chapter 6 . 7/25 Well, unless they drastically changed the rules in Azkaban it'd be kind if hard for Draco to get a, married and b, his wife pregnant. They just don't have those types of visits there. I'm not surprised by how many crimes Fumblemort committed. In early Algebra they teach about sets with they saying, if one than two. If two than three and so on. Apply that to Fumblemort and you really have to wonder where it'll all end. I realized when I finished this that I'd read it before and enjoyed it than as well. So thanks for a wonderful story. |
| Bronze chapter 5 . 7/24 Who says they can't have Quidditch along with the Tri-Wizards tournament?! All three schools have fielded teams along with their Champion! Unfortunately, Fumblemort Will be coming for Harry in the last chapter. The old fraud mistakenly believes Harry has to die to prevent Vultureworst from rising yet again. Not to mention he has to die so Fumblemort can be seen as the great hero and get all three positions back. |
| Bronze chapter 4 . 7/24 It's been a very interesting four years of good school and no life threating adventures because some senile old fool wanted a martyr instead of a hero. I like how Hermione took the information that Harry'd come back through time for her. Though, should ol' Fumblemort find out the truth he'd be even more hateful to Harry. Harry's spoiled all his carefully plans for him becoming the big hero of the magical world and ruling it form behind the scenes. Though I'm not too sure Harry's right about the snake being a Horcrux at this time. Most times he doesn't do it till after he gets a new body. But as it's your story the snake can be the very first Horcrux if that's how you want it! Anywho, if Vultureworst has a new body I wonder who's blood he in the ritual? And who helped him do it? |
| Bronze chapter 3 . 7/24 See how calm the years can go without Fumblemort making it a living hell for everyone? Notice how there were no life threating events since the old fraud ran off? Hogwarts became just another fine school instead of a death trap. |
 Amber Serpent chapter 6 . 7/16 What about Ernie?! |
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/11 Cute, concise, and clear - great job! |
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/14 blood adoption would make harry no longer a potter. |
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/14 confused you wrote it was the last time harry saw Dumbledore before the trial witch is funny since Dumbledore was not at the trial. |
| Beauty Eclipsed chapter 6 . 6/11 Loved the plot! |
| csheila chapter 6 . 6/10 Good job, especially for (i believe) first story. Liked your epilogue much more than EWE |
| csheila chapter 5 . 6/10 Coolness all around. Loved how the political problem took care of itself |
| csheila chapter 4 . 6/10 Interesting. He should not have slept with her until he had told her. They didn’t go all the way but far enough. But she stood up for herself and seems okay with it. So no foul |
| csheila chapter 3 . 6/10 Love it. Grabbing Horocruxes is cool. But Harry manages to top off each punishment (e,g, hurting Malfoy’s more) |
| csheila chapter 2 . 6/10 Smooth liar. Older than 11 but not coming across as a creepy adult |
| csheila chapter 1 . 6/10 Like it. Love how you move your stories. Harry always takes steps forward. If you re-edit the story, be sure to explain how he hid the rings from Augusta. |
