*thumbs up*

My boys...my poor boys. Why didn’t this happen on Mortis? Makes more sense then that mess. Good work

Hm, I haven't watched the Clone Wars series, but I decided to give this story a try anyway, because the summary was so intriguing and because I was sort of expecting that with your writing style, the necessary things would be explained to me anyway. And I was right, because I think I understood the whole story, although obviously I don't know what really happened on Mortis. It was very interesting to read about Anakin's thoughts as he realized what had happened to Obi-Wan, and also what was happening to himself. I felt that the mirror symbolism was at some places perhaps a bit too forced, especially in the beginning about his slave childhood, but I can appreciate how you used it to show that Anakin doesn't really know who he truly is. And the fluff at the end was really heartwarming. I can only hope that perhaps this Anakin and Obi-Wan will have a different ending than in canon... But it can go both ways, I'd think.
Thank you for writing this, I liked it, and keep writing! !

This is amazing!

WOW! The Mortis arc was amazing as it was but this... Awesomely done, m'dear. :)

Hey, that's a really original concept! I don't think I'd ever read a fanfic with that particular plot before, and that's quite the achievement on your part considering how many Mortis-based stuff there is out there. Of course, that's probs because the Mortis arc is already epic enough even without AUs. I loved your twist though! I absolutely adore that a dark Obi would use Makashi *-* soooooooo fitting. Sith!Obi would obviously be very similar to Dooku, and you painted that perfect balance between power and precision so well! I assume the Son kinda possessed him, btw? Like he did with Ahsoka? Ya know, since he refers to "other methods"?

Also, HUGGING.

HUGS.

PHYSICAL DEMONSTRATIONS OF BROTHERLY LOVE.

ALL OF THAT.

*dies*

Yeah, it's just noice. Love it.

I have a long day tomorrow and it's almost... Well, tomorrow, so I can't read it three times in a row, but I loved it. Kissssss

It was quite nice. I like how you described feelings of Anakin.