| Reviews for A King Was Born |
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Utkarsh chapter 5 . 6/29 Useless fucking author He’s a millionaire He’s acting like a fucking sugar high Gryffindor instead of the sly, smart, prepared slytherin he should be Go fuck your self on a pole |
bounders 12 chapter 23 . 6/15 Plz plz plz update soon |
ExS-DrIfTeRr chapter 11 . 6/15 What? He gets kicked out for defending two girl from being raped/beaten? That is idiotic to the extreme |
sunandkp chapter 23 . 5/15 Dunno why u need to clarify your plot, those that want to read this fine tale, will do so! Please continue... |
Uday Sra chapter 23 . 3/15 good |
sirigrace224 chapter 8 . 2/14 Harry sounds SO MUCH like Tony Stark talking to Loki in the first Avengers movie. |
Dark-Prince-of-Clowns chapter 9 . 12/28/2019 Is Harry using Daphne? There's no reason for him to marry her, really. If their father made her younger sister heiress, the contract would be null and void over them both. As it said she had to be oldest And heiress, from the way you worded it. Unless Daphne merely worded it badly. Although with the shabby state of wizarding politics, I bet nearly any half-assed american muggle lawyer can find a million and one loopholes in it. Especially since the foggy laws of the wizading world might actually contradict themselves somewhere, since nephotism and bribery seems more important than logic and rules. |
demon87 chapter 23 . 12/13/2019 super |
Kelorus chapter 23 . 10/16/2019 This fic is marvelous and I have hope you will write more. My thanks. |
Blackstone4005 chapter 19 . 9/1/2019 Thanks for clarifying the confusion with the non-horcrux Tom remnant. I was also wondering how Harry could have told James about his issues without Tom stepping in. Seems he didn't and found a way into his psyche to find his animagus form. While there, he fought off Tom. Now we're back up to speed. There had to be some conflicts anyway or Super Harry would get dull. You have a wonderful style and keep us wondering what's coming next. Thanks for you efforts to entertain us. |
Dark-Prince-of-Clowns chapter 6 . 8/16/2019 Why would Fudge be nervous about Harry meeting Sirius? Now, I get why he was nervous when he escaped. That would make HIM, as well as the ministry as a whole, look bad. But Fudge was NOT the minister during the war. And as such, would not be blamed for his predecessor's mistakes. If anything, he could use it to taint his predecessor's reputation with it, to ensure he never got the chance to make a return, as well as being viewed as a fighter for justice, by getting him a trial. And, of course, he truly DO believe Sirius to be guilty, as far as I know. And this time, there is no escape to cover up for. That aside, this is a quite interesting story. |
Guest chapter 23 . 6/19/2019 I'm confused. Is riddle back in his box so to speak. I mean they removed the piece of Tom. Than put it back. Harry is able to see him and speak with him. That's no longer possible or will they be able to communicate forever. If Harry destroys or removes toms soul from all his treasures. And than send Tom through the veil. Well only the soul piece in his scar will still be around. Maybe there is a way to keep the soul piece but get rid of Tom. Like consume him somehow. Is it in his scar again or did he merge with his whole body or his own soul. Some things aren't being clear at all. |
Guest chapter 14 . 6/19/2019 Now I'm confused he's he manipulating daphne because we didn't get to see how he came to know he was an idiot and should of let daphne in. |
Guest chapter 13 . 6/19/2019 I was really enjoying this story. And I liked Daphne for Harry. But he tells her he doesn't love her after he kisses her. I'm thinking he will probably cheat on her especially since he said pretend girlfriend. I hope he doesn't but his new ceo's lust for him makes me think he will ️. As well as how emotionless he was after kissing her and how he did it without asking. That was probably her first kiss. I would say it was Harry's first kiss but idk he could already be having sex. I don't want him to be a dark lord. I wanted to see a true slytherin. A business man and a politician yes. He's a lord so I'd like him to not be hurtful to his future wife. I'd hope he does come to love her and she give him balance. Cause the turn this story is taken I'm not sure I like. |
Joe Lawyer chapter 23 . 6/19/2019 I liked this fic. It had an unusual premise with and unusually competent Harry. I think it would have been interesting to have explored more of that successful life in the muggle world, including outside of Britain, though. And then shown how that has morphed over time to include the magical. I also feel like Hogwatts is superfluous. At no point throughout this entire story have you suggested the teachers of Hogwarts have actually taught Harry much of anything. James taught him in reality. If you want to push the idea of it being of social value, to get to know the next generation of wizarding Britain, then say that. I wish this fic hadn't been abandoned. It's quite entertaining. |