This is so adorable and kinda weird but like in a cute way, kinda.

Ooh well this was fun. I feel like Weiss isn’t much of a tsundere these days. It’s super cute. I loved them all so much in this- especially Blake and her little slip up. And Weiss and yangs personal problem lol. I feel like you really did justice to their character. It’s a shame to see you haven’t updated this in a...while...

I'm not a big fan of Ruby in this admittedly. She's just so ignorant and naive that it's unrealistic. Are we supposed to believe that she's a good team leader when she doesn't have the intelligence to realize that trying to talk to someone in the showers is a big 'no' even after she was already yelled at? Are we supposed to believe that she's capable when every problem she had she resorted to going to Yang and following her advice and plans? Are we supposed to believe she can handle this when at the end of the day Yang had to approach Weiss herself to tell her to lay off? Honestly this chapter does more to say that Yang should be team leader than anything.

I just love how Blake's always prepared. Ty for the chapter XD

So..F...Cute!...I can't take it, I think I'm gonna die...No! I still need to read the chapter 3! ( ty for the chapter!)

What's a bad plan? It's when Nora's involved XD! Aaa this fanfic made my day XD

What you did this chapter with yang definitely wasn’t necessary. Too forceful I understand she needs to follow through because Weiss makes Ruby cry but Weiss making ruby cry you could just not have in. weiss learned her lesson the first time really and shouldn’t be put through the same “talk” so quickly in succession

this wasn't funny at all.
chapter 1 and 2 were better in my case but this one I have no words no good words I mean.
I agree it's not funny or good with how yang is forcing things to be solved with well, force that's not going to build anything between Weiss or Ruby and sorry but this chapter also makes Ruby looks like a crybaby which she isn't and Yang looks like a nutcase now and not in a good way.
I understand what you were trying here but the ending of this chapter was the wrong way to go.
for the reasons, I stated above.
if this how the story is going to go (which I hope not cuz I see a lot of potential for this story.) then this isn't a good relationship.
to me, I think it should end with Ruby trying to apologize to Weiss thinking she did something wrong to anger her which ends with Weiss apologizing back in a way that it's funny.

p.s, before anyone says it I'm not angry just disappointed with this chapter how it began, is fine but the ending could been handled a little better. and yes I know what Tsundere means but that wasn't the problem I didn't have a problem with how Weiss acted I have a problem with how this solved there was no growth with Weiss or ruby it felt more like a step backward then forward and if this was for comedy it was done poorly.

in short, chapter 1 and 2 were good. chapter 3 there was potential with the start but the ending quickly dash that and it felt more like it was for a cheap laugh more than anything else.

if I had to rate this chapter I give it a 1/10 the beginning was good a great start but the ending was weak unfunny and yang and ruby weren't written very well.

This sadly turned into total trash with Yang solving everything with force, especially issue like this. Disgusting. Any redeeming quality this fic had in 1st and 2nd chapter are lost. I'm done with it.

Hahahhaha this is adorable

Tsundere Queen yaasss

Roman has a dying wish!

Haha this was awesome.

I loved how Roman was always there and how Weiss was wondering how he got out of prison so fast. I did feel bad for Roman and his henchman though haha.

That ending.

Just wanted to respond to the mean review i saw. ITS FAN FICTION NOT CANON U DUMB FUCK. PLEASE CONTINUE TO GET UPSET OVER SOMEONES TAKE ON THE STORY anyway. loved it

This was good however the time-frame and with Ruby being leader and Weiss's so stated tsundere character seemed incredibly weird especially with nothing truly happening.

Blake was hilarious and Yang had her moments but she was wasted, the real problem is so much time passed and yet nothing actually happened in the chapter. I mean they are still in the same place as when we started the chapter.

The idea has merit it just didn't work here as you didn't execute it all that well.