Reviews for A bet
Haji the Monster chapter 4 . 12/15/2019
yeah, this chapter was crap. I mean really, really crap. just absolute crap. Naruto is now a missing nin. let's be clear ANBU would have killed a foreign nin from entering a sealed council meeting. also the council cannot overrule the hokage, she could have killed them right there for treason. also how would Temari recognize Naruto when no one else did? plot holes and stupidity, just cause he's OP doesn't mean you have the stack the deck against him for no reason. you've created problems for him where none exsist, nor should exsist. and for what, your lack of clear planning in this is sad and very typical of authors who make super powered versions of the characters. please at least think before you flop this crap on us.
arckane chapter 1 . 11/21/2019
This is stupid
Shifter chapter 4 . 11/18/2019
Great story continue as soon as possible please
lostxinxthexdarkness chapter 4 . 11/19/2019
Pretty good fic so far, that last bit in the council chamber was a bit cliche, and I find it difficult to believe that there wouldn't be guards posted to keep people out of a council meeting especially foreign Shinobi (one from a Village that quite recently mounted an invasion on the Leaf Village no less), but other than that it's been a pretty enjoyable fic for an OP-Naruto fic.

I'm looking forward to reading more of it in the future, keep up the good work.
SPark681 chapter 4 . 11/18/2019
Would love to see them try and take on Naruto anyways keep up the great work!
biginferno chapter 4 . 11/18/2019
Great chapter yikes for the council and civilians that hate Naruto once he finds out about that and I assume Tayuya will become very strong and will be every bit as much of a threat as Naruto and will probably help him carry out his revenge especially after her full feelings for Naruto develop
Chad Thundaga chapter 1 . 9/2/2019
I like this
biginferno chapter 3 . 8/31/2019
great story so far please update and complete looking forward to Tayuya's Introduction
Phantom Frost chapter 2 . 7/30/2019
You repeated the same paragraphs twice
AnkoUzumaki chapter 3 . 11/8/2018
Loved the chapter!
Dr1zzy chapter 3 . 11/7/2018
Good ch
agnar chapter 3 . 11/7/2018
So, within a chapter, we went from Naruto can live in konoha, just not be a ninja of konoha, to he's now banished and cannot live there and must leave.

Oh and he's now godly strong, but he still wasn't told about his parents and anything they may have owned or left for him?

Not to mention he just shrug off all he owns being destroyed, keepsakes and all. And wouldn't Anko at least need to directly let Tsunade know she's leaving with him, so she can do record keeping, paperwork?

It's really just moving way too fast. Obviously you wanted to get on with him traveling. But you could've made it like, a time skip, rather than all this happening over what seems to be one or two days.
SPark681 chapter 3 . 11/7/2018
Hmm, damn seems Naruto has gotten uber strong wonder what awaits him in the future anyways keep up the great work!
Calebros chapter 2 . 11/6/2018
please check the chapter, you have repeated about 1/4 of it (when Naruto explains why he is no longer a ninja of Konoha). There is also one another before, but that,is smaller
son of wind chapter 3 . 11/6/2018
Really nice chapter!
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