Reviews for Through Fire And Shadow
mattemo153 chapter 5 . 5/20
I really love your story so much!
mattemo153 chapter 4 . 5/20
I still liked it. Thank you for writing.
mattemo153 chapter 3 . 5/20
This was amazing! So powerful. All the ups and downs and inbetween. I thank you for this. I love how you portrt susan!
Archangel Writings chapter 5 . 4/5
Oooooooh your back, freaking loved this chapter! Got to see our beautiful Queen kick some (mostly) corporeal ass, we’re finally in the beginning of The Fellowship of the Ring, and we got to see Susan’s... condition (For lack of a better word) in action. Though I didn’t expect what happened in the ending of this chapter to happen so soon (Still loved it though ;D). I’m guessing Susan will catch up with Frodo and the others either at Weathertop or Rivendell (Or during the journey in between). Keep up the amazing work my guy/girl...
...Archangel Writings
Oricke chapter 5 . 4/2
Love this, can't wait for more
genbo chapter 5 . 3/25
Great fight scene!
Go Susan!
Will she join the fellowship once she & the hobbits arrive in Rivendell after three adventure in Bree.
I am looking forward to reading more soon.
Well Done & Great Work!
ej101 chapter 5 . 3/24
This is a brillant story, I hope you update soon!
Will there be a romance between Susan and Legolas? I really hope so, as you don't see to many of those!
Oh, is there any way Aslan could give Susan some sort of gift, such as everything else from the case, or even imortality so she can live as long as Legolas?
Keep up the great work!
Just a thought, would you be interested in co-authoring a HP/GOT crossover? I have heaps of ideas, but am no good at writing them into a story.
BlueRosette23 chapter 5 . 3/24
I missed this story so much! I'm happy that you updated. I thought Susan was going to die again if you didn't mwntion that she wasn't. Keep up the great work and keep safe.
Hank1967 chapter 5 . 3/24
Excellent chapter! Glad to see the hobbits make it away from the ring wraiths. Sorry to see Susan get hurt, but then again, she's not dead, is she? Enjoyed all of the detailed writing. It felt like the perfect blend of Narnia and Middle Earth. At least something good is coming out of all this quarantine nonsense. BTW - did her getting 'killed' separate her from the ring?
ro781727 chapter 5 . 3/24
The first of the Nazgûl she encountered was a bit OOC in acknowledging itself as a slave, the Nazgûl have no memory of what they used to be. They only know devotion to Sauron. You were also mistaken about Rohirrim women not being allowed to touch weapons: they are trained in self-defense but are forbidden from riding in open combat.
b6076b6076 chapter 5 . 3/24
Yay. More please.
Davee chapter 5 . 3/24
Yay thank you so much for another great chapter! I’m bored out of my mind due to the quarantine. This update is a godsend! I love the action scene. Will Susan be rejoin the hobbits in the next chapter? Hope to read more from you soon!
osterreicher97 chapter 5 . 3/24
Well... she at least managed to thin the number of riders for a time so that should make the Hobbits journey along with Aragorn much easier for a time.
Hank1967 chapter 4 . 2/19
Interesting start to the story. Enjoyed the trip through Narnia (what was left of it) and Aslan's Land. I think you are pulling off Susan rather well. She seems in keeping with the original character created by Lewis. The fight with the Nazgul reminded me of the fight scene with the Obscurial in Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find them. Very well done, that. And now Susan is in Middle Earth... Update soon, please. I'm looking forward to seeing what you do with this.
Guest chapter 4 . 8/14/2019
I really love this story! And I really hope that you’ll keep updating 3
I’ve been trying to find a good narnia/ LotR crossover for ages and this one is absolutely amazing :D keep up the great work!
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