that was... interesting to say the least. i loved that there was my two favorite characters together, but it was a little bit sick

This is really good. Thanks for sharing! Loved it.

It is the first fic where abortion is hinted in the magical world. Remus Lupin, being the weakling he is, only deserves an aborted fetus.

Such a beautiful piece of work one of my favorite events in the Downward Spiral Series

Come on... just why... poor Tonks. I'm not strictly against an evil Harry but one in favour of Voldemort? NO. and if you have to make him evil then why do this to poor innocent, likeable Tonks. This is deeply wrong, dude.

This was sick. I really hoped tonks would kill her somehow.

This was brilliant. Literally the first words to come out of my mouth after reading this were “holy fucking shit.” I love it. I always love Tonks and Bella together and it’s so amazing to see other writers spin on them. BRILLIANT.

well fuck that's yeah a very dark yet believable interpretation of brainwashing quite frankly I found it fascinating which makes me worried for my psyche

This was excellent. The pacing was excellent, the slow descent into submission was believable. One hell of a job.

I'd love to see more work like this, especially in the context of your ongoing series. If you haven't read "Eden", you should at least skim it for some inspiration on torture scenes.

Again, one hell of a job. This was dark and very fitting; you've outdone yourself.

Bahahaha this was so deliciously evil! You are a one of a kind author!

intense but very good one-shot

Wow. That was...dark, heavy, and nauseating, but how could it be anything else? I commend you though, on your ability to show the painful progression of Tonk's eventual breakdown and surrender.