Reviews for Walk in the Park
WaterDragonMaverick chapter 1 . 5/19/2019
This was a very nice story. A day at the park becomes more action-packed when Lincoln defends his sisters from bullies and the Louds fight them off. Great work!
7lights13darknesses chapter 1 . 9/17/2018
My favorite part was Lincoln's reaction to Lynn beating up Lorth. Keep it up.
Gamelover41592 chapter 1 . 9/14/2018
this was sweet :)
Guest chapter 1 . 9/7/2018
Kind of unrealistic, but still heartwarming.
Omni Spectator chapter 1 . 9/6/2018
Heartwarming. Action packed. And even humor! You are seriously talented. I hope you upload more stories soon.
agui972 chapter 1 . 9/6/2018
A nice short story about Lincoln and his younger sisters I like it.
nuuo chapter 1 . 9/6/2018
Fun story, this wasn't pastebinned before?
Yellowpikmin88 chapter 1 . 9/6/2018
That was a lovely story. Well done