Reviews for Walk in the Park |
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WaterDragonMaverick chapter 1 . 5/19/2019 This was a very nice story. A day at the park becomes more action-packed when Lincoln defends his sisters from bullies and the Louds fight them off. Great work! |
7lights13darknesses chapter 1 . 9/17/2018 My favorite part was Lincoln's reaction to Lynn beating up Lorth. Keep it up. |
Gamelover41592 chapter 1 . 9/14/2018 this was sweet :) |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/7/2018 Kind of unrealistic, but still heartwarming. |
Omni Spectator chapter 1 . 9/6/2018 Heartwarming. Action packed. And even humor! You are seriously talented. I hope you upload more stories soon. |
agui972 chapter 1 . 9/6/2018 A nice short story about Lincoln and his younger sisters I like it. |
nuuo chapter 1 . 9/6/2018 Fun story, this wasn't pastebinned before? |
Yellowpikmin88 chapter 1 . 9/6/2018 That was a lovely story. Well done |