Reviews for The Viral God
Borello chapter 6 . 9/23
the story is really interesting. i hoped to read more chapter.
DarknessKiller123 chapter 6 . 8/27
This is still alive? I hope an update :(.
Guest chapter 6 . 7/9
Hope this story isn’t dead I liked the original, then I found this, I liked the stuff you borrowed form hp lovecraft, can’t wait for the next update, keep up the good work.
EarlSilver chapter 6 . 3/27
Sorry for not being logged in, but it doesn't work on my phone. Will you add Hinata to the harem, if you ever continue the story of course?
Shiva997 chapter 6 . 2/25
when you are going to update?
koseta.a chapter 2 . 1/25
... Every step of his life... Has Naruto never changed clothes? Has he never taken a shower, gone to the bathroom? How can Alex not know what gender he is? Why would Naruto need to identify he's got one of two sexual organs.
Draegoon chapter 6 . 1/1
i am really glad to have found this because i quite liked the original and these rewrite seems so much better in certain sences. i am slightly confused that the new infected didn't go to Naruto but i will chop that up to it being it's own sentient creature now and the other new ones following the closest sentient of their own species. Venom is cool you said that female Venom will come later in a response so female venom which i find cool. The Kushina thing makes me quite sad but if i remember correctly the original brought Kushina back. i do wonder seeing as to how Kurama is awake now and that probably means that Naruto can find him then are you going to have Naruto eat him? keep up the good work!
Chyllen chapter 2 . 11/23/2019
Why did she tell him to get some rest when previously it was stated that he doesn't need it. Is this going to a fic where the author forgets previously stated fact just because it is easier for the author
Discordedshados chapter 6 . 10/16/2019
More please
Connorfig chapter 6 . 9/16/2019
So slight spoilers for those that haven't read Viral Maelstrom but will Venom pretty much replace the Necromorphs in the sewer?
WanderingMercAsashi chapter 1 . 9/14/2019
More effeminate garbage.
Guest chapter 6 . 8/30/2019
Not sure about this chapter, and considering this is where the updates trail off, I am pretty sure NOBODY else is either... Blackllight and venom are two COMPLETELY different things, and also NOBODY wants a "second fiddle".. as in Naruto ONLY "benefits" from blacklight. Yeah, maybe NEXT time, just have the insects EAT tourne, then start "spreading out" eating everyone else in root too.. Just a fast working flesh eating plague (think fire ants with WINGS).
Guest chapter 6 . 8/30/2019
Sound, obviously makes money, or it couldn't be a village, so it OBVIOUSLY gets clients... So basically "joe average civilian" can find the village to hire people,, but this DUMBASS can't find it, after YEARS of searching? That's NOT a very good spy, let alone, not nearly "the best". It's LAUGHABLE! (also he should have you know, STOPPED the snake from even FORMING it!) He really is INCOMPETENT, "like sensei, like student" I guess. Orochi, as bad as he is, is really the ONLY one out of the three, that really DID anything impressive, or that seems GOOD at being a ninja. The toad, spends ENTIRELY too much time perving, but I guess it's good for "comic relief", maybe he could be "konoha's jester"? and tsunade "the town drunk"? They do "their best" I guess, I just think "their best" is a little "LACKING", but tsunade IS a SLIGHTLY better hokage then the third, (AT LEAST in stories where she ACTS like she normally would, not being bullied by elders *whom she cares NOTHING FOR*, or bowing to everyone else *she's FAR too angry and self-reliant to give a shit what they want if her orders go against them*) But then again, that's like saying "getting your hand cut off by a buzz-saw is better then by a rusty hacksaw" in comparison.
Guest chapter 6 . 8/30/2019
Jiiriya "the BEST spymaster"? UM hahahaha, NO.. He isn't, not by a LONG shot.. He didn't know the kazekage had been killed, OR that orochimaru created an entire VILLAGE, OR where it is, couldn't find orochi, couldn't find out WHO was in the akutaski, OR their motives, OR where they are located! Never found ANYTHING on danzo, or that there was an INVASION plan of his home! I mean just about EVERY ENEMY he never could find ANYTHING out about! That's NOT "the BEST spymaster", that's KINDA PATHETIC. DANZO does better and he never leaves the village! If a COMPETENT hokage were in charge he'd have been FIRED long ago from his position! (make him a teacher of basic seals IN THE VILLAGE)
Guest chapter 5 . 8/30/2019
I still don't see how these "revelations", the third can do are anything more then anything, anybody could put together with half a brain, not how they they are supposed to CHANGE anything. To the VILLAGE they are great reveals, to naruto and individuals? NOT THAT BIG A DEAL. (most of the people he interacts with, weren't even BORN when his dad was hokage)... And his parents are just DISGRACING his memory by not helping him, not forgetting it.
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