Reviews for Original Version of Uzumaki Naruto: Dawn of the Gamer
Cranky Monkey 699 chapter 32 . 7/9
I love this but was disappointed that you ended it here. I hope you don’t give up on the remake. I like this a little better but it’s pretty good
angel.nieves.1656 chapter 32 . 7/7
So I caught up and finished this story a few hours ago but I was at works so I wasn’t able to post anything. Really love how far you went with it and how much more in-depth you’re getting with every character and more of Narutos skills. The Summoning was an awesome twist that I did not see coming and can’t wait to see what else you do in the reboot of this story that you’re doing!
angel.nieves.1656 chapter 29 . 7/7
Gotta say, I love your Omakes XD
angel.nieves.1656 chapter 28 . 7/7
So I’ve been reading your revamped Dawn of the Gamer caught up to the latest chapter(or what was the latest chapter of you have updated it, it’s been a few weeks since I looked at it) and thought I’d come back to this and read it again to pass the time and to read an awesome story once more. Only now do I realize that there’s more to it than I remember and I’m glad for that too! Love all the new stuff I’m seeing even though by now it’s probably old stuff but it’s all good anyway! Love it all!
Garbage Man chapter 22 . 7/4
While I love this story, the lack of "M" rated content, your obsession with sadism to the point that it got VERY annoying, women are strong, men are week, constantly countering Naruto's ninjutsu affinities with enemies that make it useless, crippling the number of shadow clones Naruto can make, no interaction with Kurama whatsoever, HUGE power level inconsistencies and a few other things was starting to pile up on my nerves very quick. The characters were very well written though, so I stuck through this. The straw that broke the camel's back was getting a KAGE LEVEL shinobi involved in the F*CKING WAVE ARC. IN EVERY POST 2015 NARUTO FANFICTION I READ, HE ALWAYS, WITHOUT FAIL, ENDS UP FIGHTING KAGE LEVEL NINJA BY THE END OF THE F*CKING WAVE ARC. The story then ends after the wave arc and is abandoned. Shippuden part 2 just never happens with these authors or ends up being written horribly. It's like a f*cking curse or taboo to have a well written Shippuden fanfiction. I think I'm done with this fandom. Marking stories as complete when there is SUPPOSED to be a part 2 that never happens is NOT COMPLETE, /\ss Hat!
Hoans chapter 1 . 7/2
So far pretty good with the exception of 1-2 things... How come his vitality and chakra levels are so low?! At least compared to a chuunin like Iruka?! Doesn't make sense at all! Also i think Kyuubi's chakra makes him more resistant to poison or sickness etc...!
RatherFabulous chapter 32 . 6/22
Hoohoohooooo!('Cause that's the sound I made when I read this chapter.)
So. First, I was embarrassed because, having just played an MMORPG for 6 hours, I was interested in his new drops, and tried to mouseover your protagonist's new gear stats. (/facepalm)

Second. Oni promise to be the most insane summons idea ever. (He's a warlock now!)
It sometimes seems like every lame writer on the planet gravitates towards some sort of big cat.
Why? Shit, they can't fly (VASTLY useful ) and they don't have any attacks past leap, bite, claw, etc., what can they do? Yawn. Oni's have opposable thumbs! (Still...I'd never play poker with them.)
Meh. It's fanfiction. I secretly long for some OP here.
Myanha chapter 32 . 6/8
En fait cest pas que son équipe qui lui chie dessus, c'est tout le monde.. ses amis, ses ennemis, ses coéquipiers, son prof, maintenant même ses invocation? Je vois pas vraiment le côté amusant du truc. Enfin je suppose que pour un amateur de sadomaso, le personnage de naruto pourrait avoir son charme, pour moi je fini juste énerver à la fin de chaque chapitre...
Myanha chapter 19 . 6/8
En gros Iino l'ouvre en permanence, n'est jamais contente, n'en branle pas une, veux tous savoir gratuitement et franchement sert absolument à rien mais elle obtient tout le bouton, et même une partie des tune? Au fait c'est bien la capacité de naruto qui produit les butin et les tunes? Pourquoi serait-elle obtenir quoi que ce soit gratuitement? Et le pire cest que lui n'obtient rien? J'espère franchement que ton délire "toute les femmes sont les déesses et les homme doivent la fermer, et celui "les incapable gueulards on tout" sera absent de ta réécriture parce que te lire me donne envie de rester célibataire à vie
Madninja324 chapter 17 . 6/7
well Hiruzen is #triggered
RatherFabulous chapter 9 . 5/21
Okay, in my headspace, I've decided that Hottomaru is a ninja version of an orange and black Tibetan Mastiff.
(Check out the size of these beasties on Google Image search!) These massive "Lion Dogs" were bred to defend mountain flocks from wolves and are intensely protective of family.
"Temperament: Tenacious, Strong Willed, Stubborn, Intelligent, Aloof, Protective."
Guest chapter 4 . 5/20
Naruto has more chakra than jonins. Jonins can do a maximum of two or three shadow clones when Naruto can make thousands of them.
frankiebayer2002 chapter 32 . 5/20
Plz write another chapter soon this is a great story
Kuro.435 chapter 17 . 5/13
That Omake is the place between HeavenHell aka Limbo
Kuro.435 chapter 13 . 5/12
It’s the 1st time that a fanfic makes Naruto have another team (aside from those when he graduated early and was made ANBU or so), and its an interesting team that has great reasoning behind, good work
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