This is pretty good so far! A lot of roleswaps I’ve read make the mistake of just doing the same thing as canon but with people switched around, but you’ve actually done really well with making things different enough to be interesting (such as what I’m assuming is Bud going to go hang out with the Blind Eye at the end). I’m excited to see where it goes!

Whoa...that was a big cliffhanger. Wonder how’ll that’ll effect the story...keep it up!

Uh oh looks like Mabel is on the fence. Wonder what'll happen? Keep it up!

This is so good! I love the twist that they stole a wax figure. Keep up the good work!

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Dalton usage approved. ;)
Great story so far, bud. Looking forward to more!

Ooh, I like where this is headed.