i read this in pinhead's voice lol
good work (:

Outstanding work, once again. 'Tis short but sweet. I'm always intrigued by reading the Prince's earlier years in the Labyrinth, and this doesn't disappoint. The slow transition from human thinking to Cenobite thinking...from utter confusion to complete awareness and knowing was sublime, and exceptional.

It's a pity we never see the Prince interact with Leviathan during Hellbound; we do in the earlier comics, and it's similar to a father-son bond. It is stated the Cenobites are Leviathan's children...albeit created/adopted children. But children nonetheless. Pinhead isn't known as Leviathan's Favourite Son for nothing. I often wonder if Leviathan favoured Elliot right from his human birth, and chose him to inevitably lead a new Order when the time came. Or did he earn the title and favouritism over time following the transformation? Who's to know? It's something that could be explored.

Nice work, once again. For something you wrote in the middle of the night when you were supposed to be sleeping, this was perfect. No mistakes from what I can see. You always leave me in awe. That's no lie. I'll be honest, though; I really cannot abide first person narrative for the most part. I just feel it's done to death in modern literature. Read most books these days, and it's written from the perspective of the main character. Is it all writers know how to do now? I much prefer to read and write from the third person. However, this story gets away with it, and I'll give it a pass...because it's you, and it's done so well. It's expressive and feels like a story, rather than a passage in someone's diary. :) Maybe you could do a FPN when Pinhead meets Kirsty to their interactions through the years? :D

Well done, and can't wait to see more from you soon. Oh, and great title too. :)

- Laura