| Reviews for White Lines |
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   ITryToFly chapter 3 . 12/24/2018 Please continue! But can you make it a brain tumor instead of breast cancer? |
| Heart Story chapter 3 . 12/14/2018 Great story. The first 3 chapters are very well written. The thoughts and dialog flow very easily. I can’t wait for another chapter. |
| sg1star chapter 3 . 10/12/2018 Looking forward to seeing how this goes, and how liv will cope with the results from the tests, will Eli return and help... |
| JCohnn chapter 3 . 10/2/2018 Excited to see where you go with this! Nice job! |
| Guest chapter 3 . 9/18/2018 He better keep his word! This is really interesting, please write more ASAP! Most “Elliot returns” stories are so cliche but yours is amazing! (: |
| spacekitten2700 chapter 3 . 9/17/2018 lets see where it goes |
| You know chapter 3 . 9/16/2018 Fucking little shit. |
| Roanie123 chapter 3 . 9/16/2018 I'm glad El made his way to Liv. |
| guest chapter 2 . 9/11/2018 whoa this is really good so far please post more! i hope olivia is okay and elliot is their for her |
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/10/2018 more please |
| Macy chapter 2 . 9/10/2018 Please continue this story , its a really good start. Cant wait to read what is coming next |
| Guadi chapter 2 . 9/9/2018 OMG OMG OMG ! I'm crying |
| Gay4Hargitay chapter 2 . 9/9/2018 Awesome Please update soon with longer chapters if possible |
| eo chapter 2 . 9/9/2018 plz dont kill olivia if u do ill never 4give u |
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/9/2018 why are u trash |
