I would like indeed you to mention a little more Zurg's family in next chapters :-) Only a thing: Buzz 21 years old now, 39 in the pilot movie? Theoretically, yes, practically, I do not know: the one in Toy Story complained "10 years of academy wasted" he had just finished it in Lone wolf this was settled 20 years before the events of the pilot movie-show
1) consider that from pilot movie to Mira's wedding at least 1 year passes
2) how old can we think Buzz was when he started academy? 16? 17?

Ah, after the sentence "Five years passed" control the tense please, you pass from present to past and vice versa

okay, Zurg that pretends his failure to be a trick against enemy seems canon, as much as his mental movie of Zyra's wedding XD I did not like how childish he was (FAR FROM the Toy Story 2 Zurg) But I could not help smiling in scenes like this in the FF.
Uhm, what could it happen if Zurg finds out that it was Desmond the responsible of the mess at the Star Command days earlier? and seriously, what does Penelope/Zyra actually want to do? let her new father enslave any planet (18 years more until The adventure begins) so easily, liking evil? or will she feel unable to do anything for the empire's future citizens/slaves? and therefore how could she interact with Warp, any agent...
What order do you want to follow for the series? (see that the episode list does not respect chronology: Revenge of the monster in 1st season, Wirewolf in 2nd one...) Will you put any hints to the lot of the show and Zyra's reaction, please? any action by her that could be canon-compliant (such as a plan that she can carry on in the show but display only at the end of it)?

no idea any more about how I found this FF, but it looks REALLY promising :-) Plus I like the style in which you describe the protagonist's second birth: good about details and the character's feelings, and not too simple

oooh rebirth in a cartoon, uh? let's start!

This...is...AMAZING! :D pleeeease update! Pretty please?

Well have to say this look interesting and you did a good job capturing the style of the show. Grew up with it as a good kid, good tv back then and Im looking forward to see where this goes and such and hope soon. If you need any help and such I offer my help in any way I can.

Awesome work LOVE this STORY!

its cute that he worries about his daughter like that

Ah, loving as always this weird family and can't wait to see whath's gonna happen. By the way tomorrow is my birthday, i consider this your gift.

I am loving this story! I am looking forward to Zyra in the present timeline where everything happens. I am looking forward to seeing how Zyra will be introduced to the galaxy and how the space rangers will see her as a threat. It may not happen, but if Zyra does act as daddy’s little girl, will she be out conquering planets for daddy dearest? If so, may I suggest the Chlorms? She is far more advance than them in mind and would love to see them brought down a level or two that shows the entire species that their definition of superior beings is completely different from other species’ standards. Also, I am anxiously see Warp and Zyra meet for the first time. I am also looking forward to see our other main villains, Nos-4-a2 especially. Keep up the awesome work!

All around epic chapter. :)

Interesting, good dialogues and introspection as always. Good work.

great job with luna meeting buzz :D

Looks like my guess about star cruiser 42's old crew I made back in chapter 5 was correct
They went down in a blaze of glory and that scene reminded me of what happened in Star Wars: The Last Jedi
The whole space battle was great

It also looks like Brain pods mission was a overall success especially if he got that pulsar cannons blueprints
keep up the good work

Poor brain pod 88 forced to be Zyra's spy to get some information and observe the battle ahead, a few brain pod have noticed but won't rat them out due to knowing Zyra, as long as Zurg doesn't notice all is good
Meanwhile she sits back and relaxes while eating popcorn shrimp

looking forward to the battle ahead and see what Captain Luna's team can do
Also nice ending seeing things from Buzz's point of view at the end of the episode Lone Wolf flashback

Well

okay first batch destroyed