Sweeter ending than I expected. You could easily turn this into a longer fic if you have the time and inclination.

First things first, I hardly read het fics these days. I really loved the pain and anguish you put the characters go though. Sometimes we do things which we regret later but can't do anything about them. Same happen with Scorpius at least, he came back for Rose and maybe Rose will forgive him

Your Feedback/Grading for Assignment #3

Examiner: Angel

Grade: 20/20 - O (Outstanding)

Feedback: "Healer!Scorpius is everything. I hate that they had to go through what they did! I wanted to just yell and say 'IT'S GONNA BE OKAY I PROMISE!' You evoked that much feeling into me with your descriptions. Everything weaved in nicely. Rose and Scorpius are grey areas in terms of characterization, but I believe that you gave them plenty personality. I can see everything in my mind so vividly. Full marks across the board! This story is like no other. It may have a bit of a similar idea that I am familiar with, but I like the style, elements, and flair that's given to the story overall. Interactions were bittersweet and so real! I could read everything and picture it playing out in front of me swimmingly. The flow was overall smooth. I don't get any bumpiness or abruptness in the pace of the story. The transitions between dialogue and prose were smooth and fluid. Nice work! You completed the task, and the prompt was used. There was an underlying angsty feel, but you did provide me with the fluff overall, which I adored so. From the beginning to the end, you provided us with enough details that would fill in the blanks and holes in the story. I felt that it was complete once I reached the end of it, and I don't believe that it was rushed in the slightest. I liked this. It has some good fluff underlined with a bit of hurt/comfort and angst in it. It's a good mix that should be enjoyable by other readers definitely. No SPaG errors were spotted in the fic that would take away from it. Your story is within the word count, and the information we needed is added to the note in the beginning. You rock, Mary!"

This is such an odd little story, and yet it's also very cute. Scorpius basically becomes a huge blabbermouth, which is the exact opposite of what I HC him as, and it's hilarious to have him blurt out his life story as Rose sits awkwardly at the pregnancy table thing. This is definitely such a meet!awkward (do those exist?) meet... uh... the opposite of meetcute.
I love Rose's women!power speech, like YES! You do not need another man telling you what to do in your life, especially one you hadn't seen for so long. And Scorpius being all "eep not what I meant" made me laugh doubly so. This is super original, I don't think I've read anything like it. Congrats on your JP Mary ;)

Cuteeee 3

Awww cute!