Each time the author types 'as', take a drink.

you keep using "railgun" and follow by its bullet ? it also super joke railgun too. mach 3 is slower than some rifle and dont hold a candle to modern cannon.
If you want to keep using techy and cool stuff at least look at the basic of it.

Please for the love of God stop spamming 'as' in every freaking sentence!

Ok will be waiting

If you do not finish this story, done a last chapter who explain the en quickly. It is better than nothing. Thank you.

I think you better revise the prev chapters man, better than letting it attract bad reviews, the inconsistencies there really stick out

Physics please, youre misusing plasma projectiles, how the fk can a plasma stun, they only burns

Would've been a good story if it wasn't for inconsistensies in the first chapter. I thought you said civilians are protected by nanobots against physical harm? How come the enemy soldiers could rape and execute civilians without getting attacked by these nanobots?

You need to fix your habit of using "as" in sentences. It's too much.

you should space the paragraphs. Its hard to read when they're all bunch up like that

That "Corvette" is bigger than a supercarrier

Colt Formal is still alive! He is not dead so Myuui cannot say he is dead

Yay a new chapter

93 million power suits? that’s a bit much don’t you think?

Love

Hope you doing well with all going on