Really good read. Very cleverly wrote. Hopefully there will be a update soon

I just love this story's basis, this chapter is also well written, 9.8 / 10.0!

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Your approach and writing style in this story is oddly reminiscent of Hemingway; blunt yet descriptive, and quirky. Obviously the tone and plot deviate your stories and his, but that’s what makes it original. Keep up the good work.

From what I can see, at this rate, Leni will never get to confess to Lincoln... alone. *clap clap clap* I must applause you, Lentex. By making Leni think of the detective by the pronoun "it" and all its derivative, you made me understand how messed up Leni's true personnality is. And each time I have troubles understanding something, it makes me think how complex the Leni you have built is. Congrats, sir. You really are a talented writer (although you had time and multiple versions of this fanstory [for me, this is a fanstory because of how full and well written it is, not just a fanfiction]). But I have to ask you: How long have you searched about the way of thinking of psychopaths, sociopaths and how their personnalities are complex ? And can you give me some of your sources? (All if possible?)

Dark thoughts on society. Can't say that they're wrong either.

I still say that this feels a bit like Johnny the Homicidal Maniac. The same dark thoughts on society plague his mind as well.

It's nice to see authors learn from mistakes as big as the original Singled Out.

Wait ! Why does Walter suddenly call her Leni but not Lori ? And I assume her list in her notebook is for maintaining her "youthful appearance" , am I right ?

Hey Lentex. Is it wrong if I enjoy and smile at what Leni does ?

Hmmmm...
The psychopath under the surface... I really like how you present the psychotic!Leni this way.

Also anorexic? Not sure if that fits but the notes were haunting.

Walter talked about overpopulation... In the Loud house!? That combined with this Leni’s mental state, and there is no telling how thin the ice is for him!

I predict a 65% percent chance of him dying at least.

3 Perfect!

I remember the Lincoln and pulling the cat's tail thing from the last one, I think. I really love how you write her psyche. From what I know of psychopaths, your portrayal of her feelings and through process is spot on. I look forward to the next chapter.

Really glad to see this back up and running. It's a little different, granted, but still as strong as before.

This story has a real American Psycho meets Johnny the Homicidal Maniac vibe to it. I like it.