Reviews for A Second Too Late
Mariposa64 chapter 1 . 2/20/2019
Please continue!
Mariposa64 chapter 1 . 2/20/2019
Dang this hurts. Badly. Hope Hermione find Harry at the end.
Kaflaful chapter 1 . 12/8/2018
This was honestly one of, if not the best, stories I’ve ever read. I’m often accused by nearly everyone that knows me, including my wife that has know me for 15 years and been married to me for 12, of being a robot with no emotions. I was even called a monster for it. This story actually made me emotional. You couldn’t have written this any better if you tried.
I truly hope you continue this story. I’m not sure how you are able to write the way you did in this story. However, if you are able to duplicate the emotional feel and quality of this story into further chapters, I beg that you do.
Slytherin66 chapter 1 . 10/9/2018
This was very good. Ron acted as expected, it does not hit home for Ron that they are at war until his family is in danger. I think Harry planned poorly for the Horcrux hunt he should have been getting ready to fight Riddle in 6th year not wasting time with other things. Harry put more effort into flying and being seeker than he did killing Riddle.

Harry depended on Hermione too much as well. I always wondered why Hermione put any faith in prophecy given her disdain for Divination.

I never liked Ron especially given how poor a friend he was in 4th year. Ron opening the chamber of secrets was such a cheat of an idea.

It will be interesting to see what could happen next. Ron and Hermione will need to leave the country I think.

I always liked what was done at the end of the 6th film Hermione and Harry were in the light and Ron was further away in shadow it set up what was going to happen.

Cheers for posting this.
CCBottle chapter 1 . 8/31/2018
I really hope you continue this one
Guest chapter 1 . 8/29/2018
Please don't continue this story. Ron is way out OOC here.
aidansidhe chapter 1 . 8/30/2018
If she still ends up with that pathetic bastard, there's no hope for her. Canon's thin justification was bad enough.
The Empty Hollow chapter 1 . 8/29/2018
That was great.
I hope you continue it, otherwise it will be a waste.
Charlie0925 chapter 1 . 8/29/2018
Loved this, just wish that there was more! ;o)
crystal.hainline chapter 1 . 8/29/2018
Oh my gosh! What a beginning!