I am so disappointed.
you had so many golden opportunities for shitty puns.
stein disarmed me
I'm armless
I had Hands on experience
give the guy a hand
at least I'm not played by Orlando Bloom!Legolas)

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

but you are writing a new story so...
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

Aww, it's always the good ones that get discontinued

Shit

This fic is honestly just a fic I come back to when I’m bored and shit it’s not that it’s bad per say but it’s just that one way too many plot holes and such and many different things going on the writing style is different and weird but not bad theirs a bit more grammar errors and is noticeable than just one or two per chapter and the fuck having his arms be ripped off for example ok I get your reasoning but just do what Iida had done or what happend to him or something similar like his arms are damaged to the point where it’s only gonna take time to fix it limbs and fingers can be kept “alive” for far more than a few simple minutes at the very least a couple hours theirs no reason his arms should be cut off and I’m pretty sure if theirs damn support tech for heroes like jet packs and other shit there’s shit for severed arms I’m only at chapters 11 and I haven’t even started that but it feels like their could’ve been better reasons to at least get him shoot style for fuck sake he just got full cowling

Is this on hiatus

This chapter should have been called Midoriya the Whitenight hero.

This story is like a meat sandwich without the bread. It focuses greatly on major events, but there's no real background or build up in between to give them substance. An example of this is how rushed Izuku's interactions with Nighteye are. It feels like there's pages missing. This wouldn't be a problem if this were say, a movie, because then you could visually show rather than tell to fill the blanks. But it's not. It's writing. This somewhat disrupts the pacing and character interactions. Speaking of which, the author focuses more on short term one liners than substantial character conversation, particularly in Izuku's case. Other than that, the story's fine.

Nice

so MomoxJirou... personally prefer Denki xJirou but not gonna complain as you did this excellently.

I love Izuku's bluntness lmao. Also, those assholes ruining their movie night! Now I'm looking forward to the date!

I love this AU

Saw the movie earlier today, thought your version was good. The fact that Melissa gave Izuku that gift makes perfect sense, and I love the change in their relationship as well. Now, we can finally get to Izuku and Ochako's excursion!

If the movie is half as good as your chapter I'm going to love it! You did a spectacular job on this one! It got me thinking of writing my own BnhA fic, but I want to wait for the manga to develop more. Either that or Midorya's dad to finally show up! (plot twist: wouldn't it be awesome if he was a villain like in the fic Virdiscent?)

I think it’s funny that I just came back from watching the movie and then you posted a chapter about the movie. Any way keep up the good work.