| Reviews for Claiming What is Mine |
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April-Showers82 chapter 1 . 2/28 It was a good way to see how compatible Kagome and Inuyasha are. |
Tenzi chapter 1 . 8/7/2019 I liked this. cute yet thorough, lighthearted yet hot. great job |
KeiChanz chapter 1 . 6/8/2019 CONGRATULATIONS! Your fic has been nominated by one of your fans for the 1st Quarterly Inuyasha Fandom Awards, run by FeudalConnection! Your work has been nominated in the following category: Best NSFW Voting will take place between June 30 and July 13, and the links to do so can be found on the feudalconnection tumblr page. If you would like to pull your work from consideration for an award, please let us know via the tumblr page or . Once again, congratulations for your beautiful contributions to this wonderful fandom, and thank you for all that you do! NOMINATIONS ARE OPEN UNTIL JUNE 15. SUBMIT YOUR FIC/ARTWORK NOMINATIONS THROUGH OUR PAGE! |
xionnevermore chapter 1 . 5/10/2019 This was so hot. |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/22/2019 I personally found all of the references to sex-mad screaming comical and distracting. Really, a scream is a scream (imagine a fan girl at a concert, or a man who’s being chased by a clown), and if anyone is doing that during sex there’s likely a problem. Being loud, yelling, shouting, moaning, groaning, gasping, etc are all pretty standard and realistic. But screaming? Hahaha that would just be awkward and over the top. Other than that it was pretty good. Everyone enjoys a pouty and jealous hanyou grouching about being horny hahaha Good editing work. Grammar was good, no distracting typos, and the flow was easy and the narration was smooth. Thanks for sharing! |
IIMB chapter 1 . 10/4/2018 Fantastic! That is real! Omg I swear this was So well written! Love it! |
vapourtrailreads chapter 1 . 9/29/2018 hahAHAHA well done! |
Twilight Master Emerald chapter 1 . 9/26/2018 I must say, Kenji was an ass to Inuyasha and Kagome at the end, even after Kagome worked hard to keep Inuyasha from trying to rip Kenji a new one, and the lemon was long overdue for the married couple, I would say more but the review has a word count. |
UnknownSoul-x chapter 1 . 9/23/2018 This was great lol |
MorikoTheHalfAngel chapter 1 . 9/13/2018 Hdosbdjnekcxbsck I LOVE ROUGH BUT SOFT SMUT COMBOS, what a damn blessing, I loved this Some good shit! |
shinidamachu chapter 1 . 9/1/2018 Damn, Kagome is such a badass, I love it! |
ELRABBID chapter 1 . 9/1/2018 Si good! I like it! |
Corpses playing poker chapter 1 . 8/29/2018 I liked how Inuyasha and Kagome trust each other. Even more than that I liked how Kagome stood up for Inuyasha in those scenes. In way too many fics she's all smiles while someone insults or even tries to kill him, then sits him for daring to complain about it. I also liked how she has removed the beads. It shows that she not only loves him, she sees him as an equal. Kenji is lucky he's leaving with all four limbs still attached. |
AM78 chapter 1 . 8/28/2018 Good one. In addition to the excellent lemon scene, I really like all the situations you came up with beforehand involving all the Inuyasha characters. The only minor issue I could find was some parts seemed a bit contrived. Like the twins just happening to get sick right when another sick guy wanders in to the village. Also the part about Kenji trying to seduce Kagome seemed pretty absurd. Like even if he is a horrible person, would he really be that suicidal to do such a thing knowing it's going to get him targeted by a very angry half-demon? Still a good story overall. |
Alannada chapter 1 . 8/28/2018 I'm so glad the idiot didn't hurt Kagome. And I'm amazed they were so patient - I kinda thought they'd start sneaking away together like at the third day for a quick 'reliever' But I guess the frustration piling up ended up in a night of pleasant activities, so yeah. I really like your style and how you took your time including all the little details like how various strangers were reacting to seeing Inu and Kag together. It was definitely a good read! |