| Reviews for Chains of Sorrow |
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  Guest chapter 16 . 3/25 My God, I think you could get a very high grade for an English creative writing GCSE if you change story's characters. This was better than the original work! |
 Z-ARC34 chapter 16 . 3/18 What about Kazuto. |
| Wyqkrn chapter 16 . 2/2 Just wondering... is that epilogue ever coming? |
| Wyqkrn chapter 16 . 1/27 Truly amazing. I was more emotionally invested into these 43k words than the entire 3.5 seasons of the anime. |
| RoboagentC chapter 1 . 11/8/2019 At first I didn't know what to think about this story except that I found another reason to abominate Sugou (had to look in a thesaurus for the best word). When I finished reading the story I legit teared up for a solid minute. I'd give you a round of applause for this, but since that not physical possible I'm just going to say fantastic job and keep on being amazing! |
| Sonochu chapter 4 . 10/15/2019 So I know Kirito's supposed to look all righteous here, but his actions in this chapter are morally questionable at best. I mean he just murdered a man in cold blood and yet no one gave a crap. Civilizations as old as Ancient Egypt had laws against murder. I guess this fictional civilization heavily resembling Rome doesn't though. Also Kirito does realize that the 100,000 he just used to purchase Yuuki is going to be used by Sughou to purchase a huge load of more slaves, and, as the story already showed, he is an exceptionally abusive slaver owner. So by saving one girl (and breaking the law in the process regardless) he's dooming dozens of others. |
| Nagisa Tr chapter 1 . 7/7/2019 Day after day i get even more reasons to love the king of rapist butterflies |
| Lord-Sylph chapter 16 . 7/5/2019 MHC eh? MHCP001? Good ending, emotional, yet satisfying |
| Lord-Sylph chapter 14 . 7/5/2019 *cough* Asuna’s rapier is “Lambent Light” not “Lambert” |
| Lord-Sylph chapter 13 . 7/4/2019 Hells bells man, you’re ripping my heart to pieces with this! Gaaahhhh |
| Lord-Sylph chapter 8 . 7/4/2019 Oooooff! The feels man, the feeels |
| Guest chapter 16 . 5/13/2019 He had Yui... If Yuuki hadn't killed Sugou, I would have found found a way to do it myself. But jokes aside, amazing fic! |
| Kitsu chapter 16 . 5/12/2019 Great job and thank you |
| RedSS chapter 16 . 4/23/2019 What an awesome fanfic, mate. Really, really touching, and kind of a masterpiece on it's own terms. I'm glad I stumbled on something like this. Not only the story is good, but the world-constructing is also excellent. And look at that, little Yuuki finally got her revenge... how sweet! Well, goodbye I guess (review's end was a bit weird wasn't it?), RedSS. |
| Guest chapter 16 . 4/20/2019 Wait so Yuuki can't have kids? Cuz that's what it sounded like there. 0_0 |
