| Reviews for An Assassin's Game |
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   deoxeyses chapter 8 . 5/6 Nice |
| BaddieDZ2 chapter 5 . 2/12 Outside of everything being incredibly stilted and not at all natural, did you really have Kirito tell the guys that he didn't want them around, but that Sachi would be welcome any time? What the fuck kinda douchebag are you trying to bring to life? |
| ClaireR89 chapter 8 . 11/25/2019 More more more |
| ClaireR89 chapter 3 . 11/25/2019 Man that last paragraph gave me chills |
| ClaireR89 chapter 2 . 11/25/2019 That was fun getting the Beta view. I've only watched the anime (first 1 and 1/2 seasons on Netflix) is yuuki the terminally ill patient? |
| Kairan1979 chapter 8 . 11/17/2019 Something tells me Leafa and Asuna won't be happy. |
| Kairan1979 chapter 2 . 11/17/2019 A lot of authors don't describe Kirito's time as beta-tester. I'm glad you are an exception to the rule. |
| Poseidon3000 chapter 8 . 10/22/2019 good fic |
| snowyassas1n chapter 1 . 10/12/2019 Um it wasnt unfair to her for Kirito to basically reject her, they are cousins. Or are you one of those incest is wincest types? |
| Fallen Phoenix of Berk chapter 8 . 10/6/2019 You have a nice light-hearted fic started here. Really enjoy it as its a nice change of pace from the more serious SAO fics. Keep up the goid work |
| edricoft chapter 9 . 9/30/2019 pls more update |
| SaintInfernalNeos chapter 9 . 9/26/2019 I can understand what feeling lost or unmotivated for a story is, and also real life taking a toll in your writing time/will cna do, nevermind both of those things combined, so while a bit said I fully get where you're coming from with this. To be honest, I like the idea of the IRL Harem without death game a lot. You may think it's not original, but really, there are almost no stories like that at all around. There is like, one, I think, that's more random Hentai without thought than anything, and most of those are usually KiriSuna or Kirito x Sinon exclusively :O Whatever you decide to do, I will support your decision, as logn as you enjoy it it should be fine :) Good luck! |
| Mike Kromer chapter 9 . 9/25/2019 Definitely a rl/sol thing with lemons probably be the best bet for this one. |
| Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 9 . 9/25/2019 You’ve made some good points. I think I’ll agree with you and support you on making an AU Rewrite. It’s probably a good idea to maybe make SAO a "not" death game and maybe just make it a "slice-of-life" fic. But I digress. I’ll do my best to support you and do better on giving constructive criticism. Sound fair? Also, I have an interest in RWBY. I might be able to help come up with an idea down the line, but that’s later. Please let me know when your poll is up. Can’t see it on your author’s page... lol. |
| Vein Bloodborne chapter 1 . 8/30/2019 Great story so far, have a few anime and game related ideas in mind if you're interested, please reply. |
