I'm confused... Last chapter said that no one in Dorne knew Rhaenys was alive... and the beginning of the chapter made it seem like no one knew where she went or why... But by the end of the chapter it appears that everyone in Dorne basically knows everything...

Ugh too conniving and promiscuous, Jon couldn't form a sibling bond with someone he would disdain so.

It’s...quite cute really

They talk about the and I quote ‘Southern Ambitons’ when It’s those ‘Southern Ambitions’ that saved Westoros from the Mad King and his clearly equally mad or at least HEAVILY delusional Son. So when they talk about the ‘Southern Ambitons’ they have a RIGHT to be Southern when they helped save their asses

‘Epitome of a Northern Lady’ Barbary Ryswell is nothing more nothing less then a spiteful bitter cunt who runs her mouth about ‘Southern Ambitions’ all cause Brandon Stark couldn’t marry her and had to settle for someone else

Only lion u like? Could that be Jaime fulfilling his vow to protect Rhaegars children?

When IS he coming to the story? Him or THE MANNIS?

Love it looking forward to more

I love this approach to the story! Also beautifully written

Looking forward to your next chapter, enjoyed this one with the different perspectives you’re bringing in. Especially enjoying Dacey and Alysanne and how Catelyn’s attitude has alienated the North. Can’t wait to see when she gets her comeuppance.

Loved the different povs, especially Alysanne. I like their reflections on southern politics, especially with how they view Sansa and Catelyn. There is also the difference I noticed between the north and the south using women and bastards as examples. In the books, no one knows who fathered Lady Mormont's children, and yet the daughters all bare the Mormont name. Mormonts are my favorite vassal house from the north because of their loyalty and such and it's great to see Dacey here as well.

Also I'm always here for the lady love.

What is with Jon named as Jaehaerys Targaryen instead of Aegon.

I hope this is not one of the fanfic where Jon suddenly realized he is a Targ and started to lust after his sister or aunt after the revelation.
Even tv show took a better approach on Jon and Dany incest.

Good story,and more logical then ,that Grey Worm and others would remain slaves,
but that could not be helped.

Somewhere in the Dreadfort Roose Bolton is smiling creeply. In heaven Rhaella and Bethany are dreaming or granbabies while cursing the men they were forced to wed.
Seriously I love this chapter. I love how you surprise me with Dom and Dany but in reality it is so perfect that I cannot even begin to think how I didn't thought about it. I ship them so hard... But then I though politics and house Bolton would not be high enough is status to wed a Targaryen princess in line for the throne. Especially with stark boys available. And I wanted to hug those two and tell them all will be fine. They are precious and not their fathers.
Finally, thank you for giving the dead mothers a voice.

Interesting idea with having a Dany and Domenic having romance, it is one I can say I have never though of never. The idea of Domenic Boltan having a romance with Dany, is a strange idea to me but the more I read this chapter ant thought about it the more the idea grew on me. I can see a Dany that is not been harden by trial tribulations she first started to experience when she was married to Drogo , could be attracted to your version of Domenic Boltan. Both Dany and Domenic come from families that do have negative perception to them do too many of their house’s not being the nicest people but both of them are good people with good hearts. I am interest in how their relationship grows and whether it can survive the trials and tribulations of the chaos that is coming.
I do like how you have expanded on Domenic’s history especially his mother. I really do like how you end the chapter with a heart to heart between Dany and Domenic. You have no reason to be sorry for not updating this story more often this year. With the problems you have between graduation in couple months to family medical issues, these are things that are way more important than this story. I am glad that you are telling us why there are several months in between chapters being posted. This way we can be assured that this great and interesting story has not been put on hiatus potentially forever. I do hope your sister gets better and stays better for the long term. Keep up the great work writing this story and good grades in school margotdavid; till next time!

Fascinating story so far.
Hope Jon Snow doesn't get caught in the middle of a plot by Jon Con to depose Rhaenys.
Though if the trauma does get to Rhaenys, like what happened with Dany in GOT S8, I hope Jon doesn't get screwed over like he did in the show. Though the Dornish will probably want vengeance like Grey Worm did.
Makes me wonder if someone will try to attack the Starks and frame Rhaenys or vice-versa. Bolton's perhaps?
The return to Westeros is going to be interesting.
The truth of Jon's Parentage will cause a wide variety of reactions.
Catelyn's will be interesting to see.
Love the interactions between Jon and Dany.
Can't wait to see how the White Walker plot goes as well.
Wonder if Rhaenys' and the Dornish's feelings on Lyanna will cause tension with Jon at some point?
Will we get Arianne's perspective on Jon?
Looking forward to Euron showing up.

Dany and Dom eh? I never came across this pairing before and now I'm curious. I usually see Dom x Sansa fics so this would be a nice breath of fresh air.

Tom Hiddleston as Willas Tyrell is now a mental image I cannot get rid of. I thank you for the fancast now

I'm enjoying how you're writing Dany here. I am loving her hero worship of Rhaenys and her relationships with the Sand Snakes.
Honestly I don't mind the idea of mad queen Dany, but for fucks sake I wanted some natural build up to it. It was probably the biggest fuck up they did, along with what they did to my favorite asshole Jaime. Season 8 was just a mess. I have fanfic tho to cope with it lol.

I hope all is well with you. Congrats on your upcoming graduation!

Who is Jon going to be paired with?