Reviews for Cracked Ceiling
Gwydion chapter 1 . 7/9
I do so love stumbling across old fanfics like this. It's simple and sweet. Cute, but not sappy. Really enjoyed the banter between Naruto and Sasuke. Glad I found this! :)
rinayukina chapter 1 . 2/28/2019
A cute little story. Man, these people in your comments are entitled morons...
Yemi Hikari chapter 1 . 1/24/2016
I'm not very fond of this one, but I'll explain why.

First, the idea is awesome, and there are parts of the story I liked, particularly the end.

Second, you didn't really get into your writing style until the end, and even then there were a few places it was off beat, but *laughs*, you rather explained WHY that is in your author's note.

But still, having read some of your earlier works for Naruto, this one feels off from your other stuff. The last part, super enjoyable though. :)
Guest chapter 1 . 3/17/2014
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Mcnitra chapter 1 . 6/20/2012
good, very very good

Do you have more writings?
SkywardShadow chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
Aw, that was cute. I loved the running joke about the stairs. XD

Nice work!
yooshi chapter 1 . 5/9/2009
wow i personally find this very funny. and i wish you would have wrote more to it.
xxguesswhoxx chapter 1 . 11/12/2008
lolz "point one for the stairs" XD
twilight2411 chapter 1 . 5/26/2008
sasuke cares!

yey!

and naruto got beaten up! eek!

sorry, im in a weird mood at the moment
Kurai's Calisto chapter 1 . 3/15/2008
Hey, this is really nice... aren't you going to update it? it would be nice :)

Love, Kurai
luckyerin chapter 1 . 3/11/2008
Aw, sweet!
Sunny Logics chapter 1 . 1/27/2008
This is a very cute story. ]

You did a very good job of writing it.
rae chapter 1 . 1/11/2008
you should continue the story. what happens to sasuke and naruto? what happens when iruka comes back? will naruto get better?
cherrysprite-san chapter 1 . 1/3/2008
DANG I WANTED SASUKE TO BEAT UP THE TEENAGERS THAT HURT HIS POOR NARU-CHAN!... great story you should make some more chapters its awsome!
siren'soldies-almostall chapter 1 . 12/2/2007
... a story this good and your not going to update? are u insane? update, sequal i don't care but i want more of this fanfic!
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