I love this story so much and to see that it hasn’t been updated in years kills me on the inside... hopefully you come back and finish this up! Great work

Nope, fuck this shit story. Go bury it along with yourself and stay there.

So in every Harry Potter fic Poppy allows no one to interfere in her work, but yet she allows bucky bookworm to do so in this one? And why does everyone have Poppy try to hinder Harry by not telling him about HIMSELF?!

i liked where this was going, i wasn't sure if this was gonna be harry fleur harry bellatrix or harry hermonie. I was kind of hoping bellatrix would become the devil on his shoulder hermonie the angel and fleur his love.

I pictured harry stepping up and forging an order with hermonie offering tatics that didn't involve blood shell and bella countering with the goin kill them all options.

but as its not been updated in while i guess i'll never know. good story so though shame its unfinished

Amazing story, I have been reading HP fics for almost a decade and it's the first time I see references to DnD. Keep the great work.

I really enjoyed this amazing story so far. I hope you add more to it soon. Please Please please please continue this amazing story. Thank you and remember to always keep moving forward.

Well, it's no surprise that Order of the Phoenix got extinct if they used swords in magic fights. I bet you think that sword looks badass, but that's pretty retarded, if you think about that. There are wide area spells that don't have beams, so swords will be useless in deflecting that. Take Immobulus (2nd year spell) that will just freeze you with your shiny useless sword. Bam! You're dead. Don't forget transfiguration spells. Swords are useless in magic world.

Brilliant! Just brilliant! I was so convinced Dumbledore was neutered and you turned it round. Well done one everything. I hope you come back to this fic someday!

Great chapter. Appropriately difficult talk compared to Jake's lake.

This is brilliant! I've had the idea of floating camera enchanted to find drama in my head for ages and keep thinking I'll just give up a write a fic for that one part then I've found it here! I must have read easily more than a few thousand five and I've never seen this anywhere else. Immediate follow and favourite.

This was great! I love quests and the like in hp fanfiction.

Not bad although Dumbledore being so thoroughly outplayed annoyed me a bit.

Liking your sense of humour with the banter!

Really good opening chapter!

All I can say to that last bit is OOF.