Narration is really easy to read. It's enjoyable. But I really do hope it has a sequel. She deserves better than that.

Wow...great story and really good writing! I love it...find myself coming back to it again and again! U really really should do a follow up story or maybe a chapter 2 from Harry’s POV where maybe he realizes that what he feels for Hermione is more than just physical...Hermione’s had to deal with a lot of jealousy in this one. Maybe it’s Harry’s turn...? Would be nice if they officially got together as a result of him getting jealous and demanding to be more serious, u know? The possibilities r endless! Please? Pretty please?

Omg that was soo good! I esp laughed at the helicopter cocks haha! I really felt for Hermione tho, giving love advice to a boy you like? Yikes that hurts haha. The ending really didn’t really make it clear if they got together in the end but I ofc imagine that they did. Still a lovely read tho! xx Joie

I really dont like giving bad reviews but this hermione is kinda pathetic as a women it just makes me cringe. You write really well though.

I hope to see more Harmony stories from you in the future! You have excellent writing and had me engrossed from the beginning. Keep it up! :-)

I love this! It was really interesting to read this from the mindset that Voldemort was never in their lives. The qay their relationships changed was fascinating. Any chance you might write a sequel?

I love the subtle yet distinct differences between canon and an AU without Voldemort, and how the characters are still (mostly) the same personalities. Great build-up of Hermione's feelings, and both of them dating other people, and how they remain best friends through it all before finally succumbing to their desires. A nice dosage of fluff, angst, feels, and smut. Well done!

I really enjoyed the messiness of their relationship. It's a bit unequal though, Hermione clearly understanding Harry but he doesn't understand her does he? Broke my heart a bit to see her let him get away with not putting in his share of work while he was dating Ginny. I know for the purpose of this story Hermione doesn't have any friends or a support system but it was still depressing haha.

Oh the smut may have made up for it! I like how Gryffindorish she was, asking him for sex. I love that she finally got to explore it with someone attentive. But! I'm sad that they never talked about what's going on between them. Does Harry like her a little more than a fuck buddy? I get Hermione's insecure and why she offered him to continue their fun after school but I wished she asked him for something meaningful. Maybe she understands him so well that she knows she has to be a bit Slytherin to get him to talk? Like he woukdn't realize until years into the relationship and Hermione would be so smug about it?

haha I'm left loving this story and praying you explore their dynamic after Hogwarts! sorry for the word vomit.

That last part made me chuckle as my partners favourite tit is the left one

This was fantastic! I really enjoyed that is was from Hermione's pov. I am a huge Harry and Hermione shipper and it did not bother me at all that she did things with Krum and McLaggen. If anything it kind of builds the story up until she and Harry finally get together.
One thing that I definitely agree with, you have to do a follow up! Maybe have Harry finally use his Gryffindor courage and ask to be more than fwb with Hermoine?

This was very good. Very sexy. I am more of a relationship person myself, so I personally would like to imagine a sequel where they get together as adults later. The casual thing does make sense for this story though. Good job!

It was definitely a bit more realistic than I think most will appreciate and I loved that aspect. I enjoyed what you did with Hermione, although packing it all in a single chapter might have been a bit much considering the explicit material (not that I disliked that). I appreciate the way you approached their relationship, it was a solid slow burn that took me back to my teens. This was well written and you did a good job.

Yes, a continuation of this would be great! Loved it to bits!

I loved this story and would love to read a sequel!

This fic was well written. To me it accurately portrays the inner dialogue of the best friend who falls for the other be it male or female. It is sad that Hermione continues to put herself last when it came to Harry. Been there done that, but got wiser! (Maybe not since I married mine, but only after putting my foot down). Thank you for sharing!