Reviews for The Royal Rebirth
MillieBelle chapter 4 . 1/11
Please update soon!
Wika0304 chapter 4 . 12/1/2019
please update, it starts brilliant
sasori231 chapter 4 . 11/21/2019
nice
lkdaswani chapter 4 . 6/6/2019
Please update!
Guest chapter 4 . 6/2/2019
Please continue!

I'm more of a m/m fan myself so don't feel the need to add romance, I could do without all the idiotic females that run rapid in this show... He's closely related to almost all the simi-decent females... Unless you could think up a Super OFC?

Instead of Jon going to the Wall maybe Harry could talk him into taking a 'journey' with him? That ends up with them in Essos. Maybe Harry could also make trunks and bags that have even small expansion and feather light charms on them? It would be awesome if Arya could go with them, but the Bitch Mother would through a fit of epic proportions...

Maybe he could give them all Jewelry (even the manly kind~ puff) that wards off minor threats or maybe has minor healing attributes?
Natsuyuuki chapter 4 . 5/31/2019
it's... short.
BMS chapter 4 . 5/13/2019
Where are the rest of the Starks?! or hell, interaction w/ anyone else for that matter. This reads more like a book report then a story. Harry did this, Harry did that and not once has he interacted in a meaningful way w/ anyone from the GoT setting. Outside of spells, he hasn't even spoken. 4 chapters and no dialogue even w/ his family. What is that about?
Good luck w/ your story but I'm afraid its not for me.
BMS chapter 3 . 5/13/2019
Harry being allowed to give up the sword is unrealistic. Even if he wanted to Ned wouldn't permit it.
BMS chapter 2 . 5/13/2019
Its not the wand that magic comes from it the wizard. If Harry still had magic he'd have been able to use it w/o the wand.
one123 chapter 2 . 3/26/2019
Finally a harry that's not perfect at everything, I like it thank you also weirwood was a good choice for the wand instead of some extra special material because if it breaks or lost he can make another one.
Shadow Wolf 15846 chapter 4 . 3/20/2019
interesting. though there isn't much interaction between harry and the stacks. im looking forward to what you will write next.
MajorChaos13 chapter 4 . 2/18/2019
Really cool way of showing his heritage. Since he hasn't got a direwold I hope he gets a Dragon. Looking forward to seeing the confrontation. Hope you update soon. Really cool story so far
Immortal ninjaaa chapter 4 . 2/8/2019
I liked the whole Harry sleeping in fire scene and how harry can hold onto fire. Ned would probably panic if Harry told him that he finds fire fascinating and wants to bathe in flames or something. Anyway I do hope that he becomes king and uses that power to improve westeros. He could even be paired with Dany considering she will want to be queen.
Athena chapter 4 . 2/5/2019
About your comment, Uzushiogakure. Rhaegar and Lyanna are a couple of shit and narcissists. The war began with their selfishness. Rhaegar and Lyanna are responsible for thousands of deaths. These young people today have to stop wanting to absolve criminals. Quite frankly! Another question: Rhaegar and Lyanna are indirectly responsible for the rape and death of Elia Martell. Responsible for the death of Rhaenys and Rhaella ... For the deaths of Brandon and Rickard.

In addition, Rhaegar is as obsessed by a prophecy as Voldemort. In fact, the two are the face of the same coin. Voldemort and Rhaegar are extremely similar (Two psychopaths obsessed by the great prophecy).
If Harry equals his canon character, he will despise and dislike Rhaegar. In his mind, his biological father of this world, is no different from Voldemort, destroying lives because of a prophecy. Rhaegar is a true sexist and misogynist.
Necrogod chapter 4 . 11/22/2018
Thanks for the chapter!
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