| Reviews for A Queen's Lesson |
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LotusFury chapter 1 . 7/27 Love your work |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/12 Great story! Can you make one where Eclipsa shows Marco "the ropes"? And can you include it in the season 4 continuity? |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/12 Nice story! Can you make one where Eclipsa shows "the ropes" only to Marco,? And can this story be in the season 4 continuity? |
InuyashaFanGirl16 chapter 1 . 2/23 OMG! |
badkidoh chapter 1 . 10/17/2019 Great story. |
Momijifan Low-Ki chapter 1 . 7/25/2019 A threesome with royalty, Marco is one lucky future prince/king! |
KRUSA1 chapter 1 . 6/8/2019 Here's to a star/Marco/Jackie threesome |
IROCK108 chapter 1 . 2/25/2019 noice. |
Majinbuu7985 chapter 1 . 2/23/2019 Love this story, Starco is my OTP but I like this idea too, and wound love to see more like Marco with all 3 queens (past, present, future) maybe also, just cause I feel I tiny bit sorry for Tom, have a chapter where Eclipsa helps him get a new girl, preferably Janna, and joins in with them too since she obviouyhas a soft spot for monsters. If you are taking requests for story ideas too, here’s one I think would be up your alley with your way of writing: while practicing magic in her room (on earth or Mewni it doesn’t matter) Star accidentally hits Marco with a spell when he comes in unexpectedly and shrinks him down. Overcome by her usual excitement and such she proceeds to use him as a “toy” in all sorts of ways if you get my meaning (the magic keeps Marco from getting hurt by any of what they do, and given his feelings for Star he eventually gets into it) the chapter ends-wether you want to do a follow up or not) with another girl coming into the room after they are done and resting, sees the shrunken Marco and it becomes clear they are gonna take a turn using him (the girl being Jackie or Janna if on Earth, Kelly or Higgs if in Mewni or maybe Eclipsa either way) and like I said you could contunue it if you wanted with that. Looking forward to more soon. |
Limes chapter 1 . 2/16/2019 I imagine the phrase "show you the ropes" gets used a little more literally during the second lesson. |
ReaperJ chapter 1 . 10/7/2018 OKay... not bad, I'm a sucker for Eclipsa and I think this is the only threeway I read with them. Really hope to see more to this whole sega build up with maybe Hekapoo dropping in. Wouldn't mind seeing something with Eclipsa catching Marco and Moon in bed, that could be a wild ass thing to read. That and Moon can use magic without the wand, might be nice to see him call the shots with Eclipsa tied up to a bed ORRRRRRRRR! What if... Marco had the wand and the marks on his face? Have his way with both of them, we know he will always love and care for Star. But come on, have past and present Queen at the same time? Like me know if you want some help with the next part! |
Resurrection99 chapter 1 . 9/20/2018 Next you should get Moon in on this. |
paolotejadaj chapter 1 . 8/29/2018 You sir, have a talent for writing stories. Another great one, I love how it continued a queen’s request. I hope you make another storie following this one, or one series out of them |
Aegis999 chapter 1 . 8/25/2018 Third episode should be Eclipsa x Moon x Marco. Hey even hekapoo can join. Wonder if moon and eclipsa will get pregnant |
Zero Uzamaki Kryze chapter 1 . 8/24/2018 I agree with Guest, there should be a sequel that involves Marco, Star, Queen Moon, and Eclipsa (and maybe Meteroa) taking place during the rule of Star and Marco |