Reviews for Morally Unethical
ColonelJayWrites chapter 22 . 8/4
Your reasons are completely justified. I do regret not coming across this gem before, perhaps I could've added to those few genuine reviewers...

Anyways, the actual review:

One thing I really appreciated was your pacing. It felt amazingly smooth. The words you used in certain situations felt natural. It flowed gracefully. The timeskips didn't feel too long nor short; for once, a fanfiction actually felt like a story, not a sequence of events/timeline.

Also, the plot. Simply, perfect. I can't believe I never thought of the possibility of Eren learning medical skills and putting them to use. After all, his father was a doctor, but that thought never came up to me.

The plot you made and expanded is fantastic. It can be as simple as a promptEren learns medical skills before the Fall of Shganshina," but you made such a simple concept so much greater.

Lastly, worldbuilding. Wow, this story actual feels like an actual addition. Not simply fiction, but a deviation from the original source. It feels... canon? Kinda? Like, a product in a, let's say, multiverse. This world that you created just feels so alive. Like it's there. It's honestly a strange feeling but so wonderful and fascinating!

I did feel that capturing Lou felt a bit easy. As in, don't get me wrong, I don't doubt the Shiganshina Trio's skills, but Lou got a head start and the trio talked for a rather long time. I can also imagine that dressing Eren as a girl should've taken more time, but Eren somehow got ahead of Lou?

I honestly expected him to escape and then the trio would go on a manhunt. But this didn't dampen my enjoyment. Amazing, regardless.

Anyways, it's getting late so I'll wrap this up. Very good read. Highly enjoyable. Stable plot, good pacing and realistic development.

A shame that it's discontinued but I understand your reasons and actually congratulate you for it. At least you made a move, instead of letting them trample over you. Good job, stay safe, good night. :3
ColonelJayWrites chapter 16 . 8/3
"I don't... want to be a woman..."

XD LMAO
ColonelJayWrites chapter 8 . 8/3
This is fucking tragic, lad. I hate and love how much detail you put into this. It's excruciating, and that means this is good. Really well-written.

Rest in peace, Difa, you are sorely missed.
hah chapter 1 . 7/26
Oh, look at cute baby Eren using what he's taught. Not yet a crazy psycho.
Nariel13 chapter 22 . 4/16
Hi AristoMuse,

This is an amazing story, it's very well structured, has nil grammar or spelling mistakes and I absolutely love your take on Eren's character. I would absolutely love to read more of this story, but I have read your note and I understand why you have stopped updating. I just want you to know how much I love this story, not just because of the plot (Which is amazing BTW. I love the backstory about the 2 years before they went into training. Also I agree that Eren should have more medical knowledge.) but also because of how well written it is. Anyway, thank you for the great story :) .
swiftshift chapter 22 . 4/4
amen, glhf in your next destination and if possible pls send me a message on what site you moved to, i'm too invested in this story to stop
Jj chapter 22 . 2/16
Nooooooo this was such a good story like a dammm good story
garden galaxy chapter 1 . 2/7
oh i like this
Dildo-Man chapter 22 . 1/24
Ok i expected it to be dropped because of the damn title and thank god you didn't :) Or so i hope? haven't checked if you had continued this fic in AO3 but i'll check it out.

The only thing I'm worried about this fic is that the story might end up to be a yaoi even though I'm not a shipper i could tolerate it as long as it's not a hindrance of the story. Plus i'm not a fan of Levi and Eren pair because i am not capable of comprehending why such pair even existed cause in the canon they were only comrades/friends maybe a mix of mentor or guardian to student feel in their relationship. I know that this ship was born from Eren's initiation in the courtroom and can't help but feel the disgust of the fans for pairing them because of that scene.

Other than that everything is good, the fic is well written and I'm wishing for more in case if you continued this in AO3
Ravioli god chapter 22 . 1/11
See you on AO3 friend! I always look forward to your writing; it's very well detailed in a way that is not a massive info dump, your work is very pleasant to read. :)
qqn chapter 22 . 1/10
Bonjour, alors je viens de terminer en une seule fois tout les chapitres que tu as mis, j'adore ton histoire! Je continuerai donc à te suivre sur a03. J'adore le fait que le Eren fanfaron histoire soit plus réfléchi, et surtout qu'il soit un brillant médecin, je trouve ça vraiment bien! Il n'y a pas d'histoire comme la tienne, et tu écrit suer bien! De plus j'aime le fait que ton histoire soit Levi/Eren, le début de leur relation est très prometteuse, j'ai hâte de connaître son évolution, J'espère que quand Levi connaîtra les côtes moins... Innocent d'Eren, ça ne leur posera pas trop de problèmes... Bref, j'ai hâte de lire ce que tu nous réserve (sans te mettre la pression, c'est juste de l'enthousiasme), j'attends avec impatience les futurs prouesses d'Eren!
P.S.: franchement j'adore sa fille, et le fait qu'elle l'appelle "maman", J'espère qu'il va pouvoir s'en occuper et la protéger. Ho et le fait qu'elle lui ressemble mais que ses yeux est du gris en plus du vert m'a fait penser aux yeux de Levi, je pousse peut-être trop loin mais j'ai hâte de voir sa réaction!
Bakubby chapter 22 . 1/6
im sorry you have such selfish readers.
im really glad you haven't decided to fully abandon the fic all together because you are doing such an amazing job and honestly?
every chapter is worth the wait
you've done such an amazing job with the story line and the character development that its really sad that you're so frustrated over all of this.
i hope everything gets better for you and that you have a better writing experience on AO3.
if you've read this specific comment then i hope you know you've got a dedicated reader that loves your story the way it is.
im extremely excited for what you do with the rest of the story
Love you AristoMuse
and ill make sure to check AO3
(P.S please don't take what i just said as flirtatious or anything of the like -strictly the love a reader has for one of her favorite writers)
Lucy Usui chapter 22 . 1/6
Dear,
I am sorry to hear this.
I like this Story.

I wish yo good luck and a fresh start in the new year.
Guest chapter 22 . 1/6
honestly, i support your decision and agree. I'll see you on ao3.
I usually love reading reviews for fanfics but many users of ffnet are excessively whiny, unappreciative, and downright rude. they don't understand that writers literally do this out of a pure intrinsic motivation.
I didn't know you posted on ao3 so I'm just happy for you.
MegaBlaze chapter 22 . 1/5
Nooooooooo dooooooont gooooooo!
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