Awesome story it remind me of between Anakin Skywalker story and Kratos Story and also Happy Father's Day and please continues this story please!?

Ooh boy, what a prequel this is; things are getting bat shit crazy!

And about Lapis, sorry about that. and I respect that you're a Lapidot fan, it's just... well... they really never went passed being just friends and the chemistry between them doesn't feel genuine to many. Myself included.

I do understand that this is a pairing with Pearl. Besides... not like there are other half-Gem humans in this story.

Bottom line; this was good, hope to see more.

which honestly sounds worse

About that beginning A/N, It was confirmed that pink loved pearl back, yet paid attention to what's considered more important to her.

I liked that Last Samurai quote! Very good chapter!

Awesome chapter mate can't wait for more and your new story on the owl house show, keep it up.

This chapter was awesome!
I also noticed that you did some things that were similar to Tron: Uprising
I LOVED THAT SHOW

Well done

How Onyx knows the word guerrilla? A word invented by human events from another language (guerrilla a Spanish word that means small or little war) that still don't happen (Napoleon failed campaign on Spain) probably it's just for our sake to explain easily the scene. Like how in sexy goddess of death Hel's name Lapiz knows FLIRTING

Several grammatic errors, but still very impressive. And definitely more sense and DRAMA than the first attempt. Not to mention you didn't just copy Cortana's voice from the Halo games; I recognized a lot of Onyx's comments to Alex from the initial Arbiter/Spartan Locke conversation at the start of Halo 2.

Hope you're doing okay.

Great chapter keep it up

Amazing chapter loved it!

Oh, holy crap. Spine tingling goodness. Excellent job, also I can tell with this that thing will be even more serious when they have to deal with the Diamonds. Dark feels right now towards the Diamonds and the pain Onyx went through.

It's not a harem, it's a love triangle.

Please don’t make this a harem The story is perfect the way it is