I love how this explores Jerry's role as a grandfather to the girls! Which is what they called him in Totally Dunzo, a super sweet moment between the girls and him. I hope you can do more stories about Jerry being a father figure to the girls. Their real dads are so absent in the show sadly :( Excellent!

English is not your first language but I believe you handled it nicely. This one-shot could be expanded, it's truly lovely. (Sweet Smile) Jerry does definitely care very for Sam, Alex and Clover.

This was sweet to read. It's nice to see a story discussing Jerry's true fatherly relationship with the girls as it is on the show. This was very in character and written well. Nice work!

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Cresenta's Lark

Cute!

This is marvelous. I love this. You really should do more stories for Totally Spies. As of this story, you only have two stories done for the series. I can help you with some stories and maybe do a collab story for the series too. Boris could help out too if he likes. All in all, this is a great short story.

Oh it is So sweet ! I have never red anything about That fandom and i never thaugh red about it but it is a nice surprise ! Thank you and congratulation!

Short, but, cute.
Hope you can write more for TS in the future, if more for that series comes to mind.