Stumbled across your fanfic while searching for something else. Found the premise interesting and very much enjoyed the story and the banter. You did a great job describing a typical ten-year-old's bedroom. Many author's would just give a laundry list of details, but you showed them from the point of view (POV) of the characters. You also had several very smooth transitions from Billy's POV to Dinah's. Not being fully familiar with all the characters, I can't speak to how true to form they are, but I enjoyed the banter between them... "He's Captain... Wait, now he's THE Captain."
Very good job, especially as you say this is your first fanfic. Kudos to you!

This was fantastic. Thank you.

This story was great! Everybody was in character and Billy was really endearing. The banter between the League was awesome and I felt all of Billy's elation when he earned their trust back. You did an especially good job with Dinah. Her counsel and effort to understand Billy was a great read. Really good work!

Awesome behind the scenes look at YJ. I really like the portrayal of both Captain Marvel and Black Canary.
Keep up the great work.

This was a really cute and sweet fic, and a perspective and story line I’m really happy to see!

It was an excellent story to read, especially if it’s your first time writing FanFiction! Good job, and keep it up!