Hello, I don’t if you’ll be able to see this since, I don’t have account here, and know little English. I just want to say thank you for making this story. I really enjoy it and find myself re reading it a lot. Thank you for the updates! Take care! God bless! Bye!

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Loving the new chapter and the odd siblings. Eager to know more about them. Still curious as to when chapter 17 ending will come into play. Especially since Marina was drugged in Achilles parents place and this is a different settings. Really hoping Achilles chooses her. Sounded like the prophecy was about her. But gotta wait and see

Something is definitely fishy and I can't wait to find out what. But what happened from chapter 17? Marina had just been drugged at the end of it. So how does it fit in now?

The fact she didn't see that coming is surprising. She was warned. Poor baby. Looking forward to the next update!

Chapter sounds good but if this is background info on Achilles based on ur notes,when and where is this? Hard to determine what part of his life this is without that info. Or something behind the scenes of the original plot and him just sneaking a girl in. I don't recall the girls name in earlier chapters

Ugh cliffhanger! Who just did that? I gotta know! Absolutely love this story. Achilles is one of my favorite Greek hero's so finding this was awesome and I absolutely love your version of his story. But I do wonder how long is it going to take her to tell him about her gift and how he's going to be her downfall. It's been bothering me cause of the fact I'd love to see them getting together but I know that's not how his story goes but I'd rather see her instead. Please update soon!

I’m enjoying the story so far! I hope Merina will recover more of her memories soon.

Yay you’re back!

good chapter and i hope people will realize there are many good story like this in this fandom and this fandom not only about shirou or some harem story

Girl I hope you keep writing this. I want to know what happens!

(Things not being historically correct doesn’t bother me. You do you! It’s just a story anyways :))

Great work, I would like to see another chapter, also dont feel discouraged by the favorite and follow numbers these will grow overtime. Try to find a beta he/she will help you with grammar.

Hercules is the greatest and strongest Greek mythological hero. And this is true even in Nasuverse, your summary is a little misleading. There are numerous errors such as these throughout the story, you might want to proofread and fact check your content more.

hmmmmm this story is good, and i hope this story got many review follow and favorite this story deserve

dude achilles is not spartan, he is japannese

he speak japanese in the anime you know