Reviews for Dance of Danger
Guest chapter 2 . 12/18/2018
The doctors name is actually theta sigma
Guest chapter 11 . 8/25/2018
Yes, RolePlayer48. Friends.
RolePlayer48 chapter 11 . 8/25/2018
Well new guest, I suppose we can as long as we only communicate via review like I do with my other pen pal, Dede42. Nice to meet ya, Sydney. Friends?
RolePlayer48 chapter 11 . 8/25/2018
I swear, for some reason, my reviews take an awfully LONG time to be sent because after posting a review on Chapter 10, I definitely DID post a review on this chapter with an ending for the Season 1 Deleted Scenes (with a part you may have to help with) if you're wondering why you haven't got another review from me yet. This HAS to be a glitch on this fanfic site or something. Has this ever happened to other reviewers?
Guest chapter 11 . 8/25/2018
Hey RolePlayer48, now that we're cool, do you think we can be pen pales? 'Cause I was wondering if we can be friends. If that's okay with you. And by the way, my name is Sydney and I don't anything against the MLP stories. So, can we be pen pales?
RolePlayer48 chapter 11 . 8/25/2018
Oh no! Not Season 7! That (in my opinion) is just as BAD as Season 8 and the only GOOD Season 7 episode was Discordant Harmony! And DON'T even get me started on The Perfect Pear or Hard To Say Anything! (shudders) Why did romance/adult parts of nature I've been wanting to kill myself from have to become a regular thing in the show since the Brony fanbase began?!

Timon: Well RolePlayer48. You'll be pleased to know that Star Swirl along with ALL the Season 7-8 counterparts/clones of all MLP characters...and even Dede42 herself have been taken care of.

Me: Y-y-you mean that WASN'T the REAL Twilight Sparkle who understands my pain and suffering and standards and things I truly can't stand in life that the majority of Equestria Girls (all of them), Seasons 7-8 are filled with who was talking to Dede42?

Timon: Nope. It was her star-billing annoying Pinkie hating counterpart from the newer seasons. That explains why she was joining in on Dede42's Shadow Play conversation. Anyways, what do ya think of this story?

Me: ...I have NO answer to that other than it's both good AND bad at the same time again. Especially these final two chapters. Ursula and Mane Seven being meh again without any comedy I'd turn a modern day MLP into and this chapter...too rushed and short again.

Timon: Kinda like how A Jungle Misadventure ended way too soon on the wrong chapter making that story hard to enjoy if feeling up to re-reading it through again. Pfft, come on. I remember these stories of Dr. Hooves being a lot more of what we're into according to our tapes. Dunno what Dede42 has against our tapes but one things for sure, there was definitely lots more of what's often in these stories. No offence. Now all we need is to find a way to end Season 1 Deleted Scenes so that when Season 2 starts, we can move on to Season 2 Deleted Scenes...despite...the boring chapters.

Me: Well, alright then. Here we go.

(Season 1 Deleted Scenes Epilogue)

Timon: Well folks. There you have it. The end of Season 1 of My Little Pony: Generation 4 and a half (there's still an error with that title in Chapter 1 that needs fixing). The big wrap up. The happy ending. The Season 1 Grand Finale! And may I just say, this has been both and exciting, enjoyable and a painful one what with all the references that's been stolen...ESPECIALLY my hula song...TWICE!

Sunrise Blossom: Aww, does it have to end so soon? I was really enjoying showing everyone watching how My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic really happened.

Pumbaa: Yeah. Besides, aren't we supposed to move on to Season 2 now?

Timon: Okay. 1) I've already discussed that all stories have an ending and that endings come at the end to Pumbaa when we were showing everyone how the story of The Lion King really happened. 2) We've been in this cinema showing everyone the REAL story of MLP ALL DAY judging by how LONG every episode and the Dr. Whooves stories are! If we started showing everyone how Season 2 really happened right now, we'd end up here all night!

Pumbaa and Sunrise: Awwwwww...

Timon: Stop! Stop that quivering look there, you two! We're doin' something else for the rest of the evening and that's that. We'll show everyone Season 2 tomorrow. Alright?

Pumbaa: *sigh* Okay...promise?

Timon: Yeah, yeah, yeah. Sure. I promise.

Sunrise Blossom: Do you Pinkie Promise?

Pumbaa: Yeah. You know what happened to Applejack and Rarity when they broke they're promises.

Timon: Okay, okay. Fine. Cross my heart and hope to fly, stick a cupcake in my ey-(pokes himself in the eye by mistake) YEEEOW!

Sunrise Blossom: (tries to stop herself from laughing at Timon's expense...BUT JUST CAN'T HELP HERSELF AND BEGINS BURSTING INTO LAUGHTER)

Timon: Oh be quiet, Sunny Bunny.

Twilight Sparkle: (suddenly enters the cinema out of nowhere) There you three are. I've been wondering what you've been doing lately after you dropped by my place earlier to discuss how Pinkie's been treated in new episodes...(gasps) Sweet Celestia! No pony told me the three of you were watching the REAL story of My Little Pony! I wanna watch it too!

Timon: Sorry Twiley. But we just finished watching Season 1 for the day. Tomorrow we're gonna be showing everyone Season 2 so you've come here at the wrong time, missy.

Twilight Sparkle: (grabs Timon's remote using her magic) In that case, you'd better rewind back to Season 1 so that ALL of us can watch what's been happening in here. (Presses button on the remote rewinding through ALL the Season 1 episodes and Dr. Whooves stories)

Timon: All?

Twilight Sparkle: Hey girls! Guess what! Timon, Pumbaa and my sister have got tapes showing how MLP really happened and we're all gonna watch it!

Timon: (facepalms) Oh no. Not this again.

Pumbaa and Sunrise: Yay!

Applejack: (enters with the rest of the group) Howdy ya'll! We're here and ready to watch!

Pinkie Pie: I've brought everyone snacks! (Reveals a whole tray full of food for everyone)

(I'm gonna need Dede42's help with the part where all the characters that have starred in our fanfics together enter the room similar to the last scene of Lion King 1 1/2 here if she doesn't mind. And before you ask, yes, that does mean Thomas and his friends are crashing through the cinema walls to watch considering they starred in Over A Barrel's deleted scene. While you deal with all that, Dede42, I'll do the finishing quotes)

Timon: Okay, you two. There's no holding back any longer. Everyone's here and we'd better not disappoint them.

Pumbaa: You sure you don't mind staying here and watching Season 1 all over again?

Sunrise Blossom: Well, everyone's here now, Pumbaa. We simply have no choice. What do you say, Timon?

Timon: Hakuna Matata. (presses button on remote stopping the rewinding and starts Two Sisters, One Fate) Shh.

Pumbaa: (whispering as the light fades) Uh Timon? This may not be the best time to tell you this but...I still don't do so well in crowds!

Sunrise Blossom: Uh-oh.

THE END
A Disney, Hasbro, HiT Entertainment (they own Thomas), Dede42 and RolePlayer48 production.

Phew! Well, there you go folks. That was the end of our first installment of My Little Pony: Generation 4 and a half (The Deleted Scenes). Hope Dede42 likes it...and fills in the gap/helps with the part where everyone in our stories (and I do mean everyone) enters the cinema wanting to watch what's been going on like that last scene in The Lion King 1 1/2 (still renamed Lion King 3 in my country) for me. I had a bit of difficulty. This has been a blast, though Dance of Danger was still a mixture of good and meh to me, looking forward to Season 2. Bye folks.
RolePlayer48 chapter 10 . 8/25/2018
What's this supposed to be then? One of the Mario Party underwater levels? Oh...sorry...Ursula and everyone was boring me again. Really wish you'd remember your sense of humor every now and then, Dede42. I do it ALL the time! Still...this was...meh again but I hope the final chapter's gonna be a good not epic/boring one. Later. Looking forward to Season 2 already.

Pumbaa: It's because of us. isn't it?

Me: HOW DID YOU KNOW?!
RolePlayer48 chapter 9 . 8/24/2018
...is this the first Dr. Whooves story that's gonna be longer than it's normal 8 chapter limit?!

Pinkie Pie: It's kind of like how an episode of our show would be longer than it's usual 22 minutes if it's a premiere or a finale (which again, premiers and finales focus more on serious than funny unlike certain movies and cartoons that didn't focus on what TV shows/movies are like nowadays), isn't it?

Me: Yeah. It kind of is like that. Just hope this story isn't gonna be TOO long though since I still need to think of an way to end the Season 1 Deleted Scenes (the first instalment of My Little Pony: Generation Four and a half) since Best Night Ever and Dance of Danger quick switching back in forth as if it's the same story according to you know who's tapes. Otherwise we might end up off track of what was meant to be happening according to the first few chapters...I can't even remember what happens in the first chapters! In fact...is this even the same story?

Pinkie Pie: I know just how you feel. If something goes on for too long, you forget a little bit what happens before all that up to the point where you can't remember if it's the same story or movie anymore. I wonder if that sort of feeling has ever happened with Dede42?

Me: I guess we may never know...well...for NOW anyway. Bye Dede42! See you tomorrow! Great...ish...chapter...bye!

Oh yeah. One more thing before I forget. New guest reviewer, I forgive you too.
RolePlayer48 chapter 8 . 8/24/2018
Thanks guys. My birthday had a few ups and downs. A lot of ups because I got a Pizza Hut takeaway for dinner, chocolate train cake for pudding and great birthday presents. One of them was a Disney book of The Emperor's New Clothes fairytale. Guess who was playing the role of the emperor. Go ahead. Guess.

(30 seconds go down while Jeopardy think music plays)

Me: You give up guessing? It's Prince John who plays the Emperor in that book of course! The only downside was the weather. I swear, since 2010 (a time when a thunderstorm happened on THAT birthday, AND we were on holiday as well at the time), my birthdays keep starting off great and then in the afternoons/evenings, they end up with very dark looking clouds which scare me because I keep thinking that clouds THAT colour are storm ones. But aside from that...everything else was great! Anyway, let's take a minute to recap what's happening here in this chapter.

Spongebob Squarepants Narrator With The French Accent: One quick re-readthrough later...

Me: Well this was interesting...and strange. Mostly strange because of Cruella. Though when you think of the House of Mouse Halloween special, that is also kinda interesting and strange at the same time if she's involved. I don't exactly know what Cruella wanted with Mickey in the first place in the House of Villains Halloween special besides taking over the House of Mouse because, like Edgar, she wasn't like any other villainy villain. All she wanted was the puppies fur to make fur coats out of to calm her cravings. So if you think it's weird for her to decide to go after Mickey even though he had nothing to do with the 101 Dalmatians movies (The only 101 Dalmatians film i had on VHS and loved was the sequel ''Patch's London Adventure'' and despite the sad moments in some places that I don't like, it was still funny and entertaining for me), then of course it's kind of weird for Cruella to be wanting something to do with the ponies too.

Pinkie Pie: Wait...we're ponies...(gasps in realiztion) WE HAVE FUR COATS TOO! Do you think that maybe if we failed this fourth challenge like how Scar for some reason wanted to eat us even though we never did anything to him if we failed to pass HIS test, Cruella would've (gulp) MADE FUR COATS OUTTA US?!

Me: Whoa...I never thought of that up until now. I guess that explains why she's taking part in Missy's plan then. She must have realised that it isn't just puppies with fur to make fur coats out of! Ooh! I have the strangest feeling I could be right here! Let's keep on reading through, shall we?
Guest chapter 7 . 8/24/2018
I'm sorry Dede42 and everyone. I didn't mean to keep leaving reviews. I guess I'm just excited for a new AU MLP story that I came up with, I got carried away. And I'm very sorry I kept annoying you Timon and RolePlayer48. If it'll help, I'll stop leaving reviews. I won't feel bad or disappointed, I promise. I feel awful that I made you feel awful. It's not fun upsetting everyone. It was wrong of me to keep pestering you. I got so excited about my story idea, that I couldn't see how awful I was making you. I'm sorry. I do like these stories about Twilight Sparkle having twin sister just fine, but I thought that maybe you would try something new.
Guest chapter 7 . 8/24/2018
I'm sorry I kept pestering you with ideas. If it'll help, I'll stop pestering you. I'm just excited for you to do a new story, I just got carried away. I'm sorry. I hope you can forgive me.
RolePlayer48 chapter 7 . 8/23/2018
Too Many Pinkie Pies, DUH! Hmm, I suppose this little misadventure with the Doc is what gave Twilight the watching paint dry idea in the first place. Nice work by the way. I'm sure I'll have a GREAT birthday tomorrow! Bye. Happy Happy Happy Happy Birthday. Birthday. Happy Happy Happy Happy Birthday. Birthday. Bet you can guess the song by now.
RolePlayer48 chapter 6 . 8/23/2018
Oh yeah. One more thing I forgot to mention. TOMORROW'S MY BIRTHDAY! Really looking forward to it. Later! ;)
RolePlayer48 chapter 6 . 8/23/2018
Really sorry about that new reviewer. I honestly don't know what he/she has against THIS MLP AU series (which actually DID happen according to our friends' tapes because Hasbro clearly just wanted Twilight to be the star). Anyways, this chapter? Hmm...starting to get a little...meh again.

Sunrise Blossom: Rushed? Too short? Filler? Mane Six being boring because they're together in one place doing something serious like in past season premieres or finales and pretty much every Season 8 episode as of late?

Me: Well...not THAT bad...I can go with rushed and too short, but I was thinking a little boring again.

Sunrise Blossom: Soooooooooooo, it IS the Mane Six being boring because they're-?

Me: Okay. Maybe it is just a little. But not THAT bad. Though I thought this story was beginning to get interestingly funny after the first two chapters.

Sunrise Blossom: I know what you mean. Other people may find serious things like fighting or acting kinda boring good or epic...but we're more into humor or comedy rather than epic/too serious. I mean, Robin Hood, Timon and Pumbaa, Winnie the Pooh. Spongebob and others didn't TRY to be epic, they were just funny. Funny without even trying to be too, I might add.

Timon: Yeah. Besides Flutters, I did a much better and funnier way of walking across hot coals...TWICE according to the episodes "The Law Of The Jungle" and "Ready, Aim, Fire!" And Pumbaa...well...

(Flashback of one scene from "The Law Of The Jungle")

Timon: (notices Pumbaa standing on the hot coals completely unharmed unlike him) Pumbaa?! How can you do that?!

Pumbaa: I've got these pads at the bottom of my feet and I never knew what they were there for but it doesn't hurt when I stand here.

(End of flashback)

Me: I guess it has something to do with the way favorite characters handle somewhat serious situations in a much less serious/boring way or the way they say funny lines. If the Mane Six handle anything serious...well, they're always serious/boring whenever all six of them are doing something boring together and the only times they're not is if they're separate or trying to be funny rather than serious or one pony hangs out with another pony or something like a duo or trio or whatever. Plus, the episodes from Season 8 still haven't helped me regain my faith in the actual show from Hasbro either which is probably another reason this chapter is a little...meh. I mean, there was only ONE good Season 8 episode known as "On the Road to Friendship" which wasn't serious or boring as most episodes are nowadays. It was just Trixie and Starlight being the girl versions of Timon and Pumbaa which of course made it the ONLY good Season 8 episode for me. But yeah...off topic, this chapter is okay...ish...but could've been funnier. Don't hate me.

Sunrise Blossom: You're really worried that Dede42's gonna take offense like she did to other reviewers, aren't you?

Me: Only a little.
RolePlayer48 chapter 5 . 8/23/2018
Nice. These are gonna be pretty tough challenges, I can tell. Good work. Also, THAT NEW GUEST REVIEWER WON'T LEAVE US ALONE!

Timon: Seriously new reviewer, isn't Dede42 busy enough already with both the stories we help her with and the (shudders) Supernatural stories that's recently being updated because she gave in to her dark...DIRTY side AGAIN ALREADY?! You're really getting on RolePlayer48's nerves because of how many critical reviewers starting from Green Isn't Your Colour (it's spelled colour in the UK where I live, so what?) have started posting on our best friend's (the kid friendly side of her's) content. Just...leave us alone, new guest reviewer. Please?!

Me: Sheesh. Calm down Timon.
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