| Reviews for Unexpected Consequences |
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DarkerShadeofDolphin chapter 9 . 7/22 Hey, I like your story so far! It's intriguing and I want to know more. It is also well written and I can appreciate the language to be similar style to the origional books. ~DarkerShadeofDolphin |
VainlyInsane chapter 9 . 7/17 This is my second time reading through what you have here, and I absolutely love it and wonder where this story will go. I am impatiently waiting as patiently as I can for more. |
Finnerad chapter 9 . 7/6 ooh encontré tu historia hoy y me encantó |
Harryhollic2018 chapter 9 . 6/25 Such a great story, I hope you continue it! |
FuckoffHarry chapter 9 . 6/19 I love it! |
Tutash chapter 9 . 6/12 I love this story! It is a version that has been done before, but you have put a unique spin on it and I love it! I like the fact that they haven’t yet discovered his home life and that Ron is not immediately evil. Much more realistic and even Snape is in character with no sudden change. Hopefully you will continue with this story as I would love to read more. Lovely writing style too! |
Tomb Raider and Walking Dead chapter 9 . 6/7 This fic is really nice, I’m enjoying it a lot. It goes away from the classic cliches of a “Harry in Slytherin” fic. I always hated how they made Sirius mean on those. I think in he end he’d care about his grandson more than a stupid school house. It’s really nice to see that here. I can’t wait for the next chapter! Hope you update soon |
Tracey230 chapter 9 . 6/1 This story is very well thought out and written. I am enjoying the details you have added in. I do wonder how classes will be for Harry. I look forward to the next installment. Will anyone find out Harry's secrets? Will Ron come around? Thank you for an enticing read. |
Hamilhead chapter 9 . 5/13 Please please please update this as I love it! An amazing idea combined with incredible writing ability! I wish I could write like this. |
sofie chapter 9 . 5/9 This is an AMAZING story! I can’t wait for the next update! I love how it shows this new side of literally every character— sides that I am positive existed always :) Stay safe and well, and I can’t wait to see another update! |
Guest chapter 9 . 5/8 I really enjoyes reading this. Harry is very clever at isolating himself. Really looking forward to seeing the day when snape or a fellow slytherin sees through Harry's illusions and helps him for once. Looking forward to a update! |
Guest chapter 9 . 5/8 So excited to see this update! I really like the way you've portrayed Sirius in this chapter. It is a very mature and developed portrayal of him. So many fics depict him in a very black or white fasion, and I like the more balanced and realistic approach you take. |
sunsethill chapter 9 . 5/9 I actually agree that something like being resorted could be the kick in the pants that Harry and Sirius needed to actually develop their relationship and force Harry to use the mirror. I enjoyed the description of the chess match between Tracey and Draco. It is interesting that there is this brilliant witch in Slytherin that no one seems to know about in the school. It might be interesting for you to explore why that is. Does Tracey hide? Is it Slytherin prejudice? What is going on? I also look forward to Ron getting some real competition at chess and maybe losing some of his prejudice. |
Black-Warlock chapter 9 . 5/8 Very nice update am curious how the rest will act onces the class have started again |
A fan chapter 9 . 5/6 Hi, love your writing and your story. May be the best Harry Slytherin yet. Thanks! |