Huh the website I got this off of told me this was completed...

...would Arya wear a dress like that? I mean, outside of another's face and for an act? And would she dance with men like that? Parody be damned, that isn't Arya! It's a Sue in disguise!

Nice use of the words Jamie used xD. I think that was the best part. I think I get it now, this is obviously parody. Much approve, just needs someone to go over and polish it up.

Sp they're guards then. Haaah...in my opinion, if you're gonna introduce some fluffy animals to the protagonist, it is simply blasphemous not to write more scenes for them! Then again, this story has death owninh the iron bank so.

Awh, come on...if you're gonna give her a direwolf AND a shadowcat who probably have no other significance to the story except to make her look good...then at least have her slip away before losing consciousness! Teehee, I assume a lot...I really shouldn't but I'd be very surprised if shadoecat and direwolf get anymore screen time that is significant.

That last review was a bit rude, sorry...I get more bold with this guest review system. The fight was exciting.

So a shadow cat and a direwolf? Tut tut. Hope this gets better, seeing as it's only 8 chapters.

Needs someone to go over it and help you correct the numerous small mistakes. The most obvious? Using in instead of on in like the last paragraph(s).

Please continue!

Please don’t take to long to update I want to know who’s next on her killing list

Please update soon

This is sooo good :D I can’t wait for an update

interesting

Hello, i was thinking if you would continue this story, it's amazing and it made curios!

Death owing property. Yeah, my watch ends here.