well that's absolutely bullshit kaguya literally made demonsions with stars out of nothing but chakra and momoshiki literally created a red shift nebuela aka a big bang in base while we don't really see anything really destucetive but we do see one moon level feat that Naruto causully overpowered while it took issei merging with great red and boosting himself to do one country level attack and he was almost completely wiped out by it. while I do agree that dxd has a few op hax Naruto has a lot of good hax to but can you imagine that if someone like Naruto gets the boosted gear that would be The most op character of all time I'm not insulting you dxd is made of a lot of hype but they never really live up to those claims

personally, no offense I find it stupid to vote between Issei and Naruto because for obvious reasons, Naruto will always be more popular than Issei.
and this is reflected in the number of requests that want Rias in Naruto's harem.

Rias in the harem? sorry but i'm out! because it's overdone!

Naruto x (Issei's?) harem (Rias, Akeno, Koneko, Xenovia and others) seems to indicate that the direction taken by your story includes a similarity to Devil Ninja and other stories.

in the novel/anime, Issei gets a harem and becomes a high-class devil, Devil Ninja, Naruto gets a harem and becomes high-class devil, Issei being reduced to a secondary role.
and many stories do that, as soon as another character joins the orc, Issei is sidetracked as Mc and often reduced to a useless role because the other character replaces him in his actions.

I hope that the next chapters will prove me wrong.

FYI, funny thing is Sona's hardly in the series either the light novel or anime (She's completely absent from the fourth season), and has no character development whatsoever yet people love her and swear she's 'The Greatest', don't know how a character you hardly see is 'The Greatest' but whatever.

Knock off the 'Rias is Overused' bullshit, it's old and not true, don't care if you don't want Rias in the harem, but just be real and say "I don't want to use Rias, that's not where I'm taking this story", ti's an annoying overused BS excuse like "Hey, sorry I haven't updated my story in two years, my grandpa died" or "Hey, sorry I haven't updated in years, my computer crashed".

PS NaruSona is the most overused pairing in the crossover genre, I checked, when you add all the ratings, Sona comes out most overused.

Both of the ideas in the A/N sound cool though I would hope that you would pair Naruto to someone that isn’t used as often for pairings

in the story where Naruto is born into Minato and Kushina’s age group, it would be cool if Naruto was paired with Sara from the fourth Shippuden movie, Mikoto or Konan whom he could meet before she encounters Nagato and Yahiko

As for the HS DxD idea, please don’t pair Naruto with Rias or Yasaka because those two are severely overused in Naruto/HS DxD fanfiction stories

Enjoyed your story and look forward to reading more :)

I hope Naruto has a harem :)

Loving the story so far, can’t wait to read more

I totally agree with I-Nex-I when he says that asking the readers is stupid and only serves to "gauge" the popularity of the characters!

if you ask, between Naruto and Issei The Pervert Obsessed By Boobs and Oppais, with the huge gap of popularity that separates them, fans and writers will choose mostly Naruto x harem rather than Issei x harem for this reason!

I hope the harem will be limited and especially see no devils in the Naruto harem much too overused, while the world of Dxd is vast (Pantheons Roman, Greek, Egyptian, Nordic), Yokais, Fallen Angels, ...

and I hope that Naruto will not be the only one to have a harem but Issei as well!

I'm looking forward to see what you have to offer for the next chapter as while I like the premise, there are some things I don't like about this story. Mainly the fact that you took away naruto's powers, but I can see why you did that. Also on that note, is he still just as physically strong as he was before? I know chakra enhanced strength was regularly used, but I didn't know if you mentioned that or not. Also I'm not really keen on raynare's backstory with her mother as I would've just preferred her to be a fallen angle that was made from god. But I'm willing to see more, so I can't wait to see more.

I don’t like harems in the first place, they’re unrealistic and detract from every story they are in, but giving the choice to your readers is even sillier I think. All it does is gauge the popularity of characters from those who are reading your story, rather than sitting down and wondering what this person would add to the story, plot, or development of the characters. I realize this isn’t a fic that’s meant to be taken as a serious literary work, or even as a serious fanfiction, but even as a power fantasy I feel like standards still help

Please no devils in his harem there are plenty fics already with them as leads and majority in harems there are plenty of women out there like Fallen Trio,Penemue,Tiamat,Yasaka,Kuroka,Amaterasu,Inari...Dont forget about Kaguya

Also ship for Naruto to be Youkai Kitsune up to 9-10 tails but diffrent from DxD ones (Ofc he wont get those tails immidiatley but as story goes more and more to shait hit the fan)

Nice chapter, thanks, continue

ok this seem well made so im going whit it, i will hold analisis till there is a few more chapters so for now see ya later and stay cool!

HHHHHHMMMMMMMM...A dxd story where the harem isn't a piece of trash!? Who knows, but this is a perfect start to the harem. YES! This is what i want to see in other harems, a flushed out legit bond between characters. I honestly was losing hope in dxd harem fanfics, hell, harem fanfics in general. 90% of all harem fanfics have been nothing but ecchi garbage, i hope you do the same thing with all the girls you will be pairing with naruto. If i would suggest a few things, i think the harem should not be so large that way it'll be easier to maintain and also have the girls be some compatible with each other. An example and someone i recommend is Akeno, now i know its been overdone alot but what i meant by compatible is in this story raynare is also half fallen angel and had people who didn't like her for that simple fact, so her and Akeno, who has similar experiences to raynare, can relate and will understand each other and that in turn will let them accept each other in naruto's harem as well as bond afterwards. Stuff like that, that way naruto doesn't seem like a sleezebag player and the girls don't seems as pathetic like most harems and it makes it more logical for the harem to even happen. The story is great so far, i loved that you had Naruto and Raynare actually bond beforehand than after the harem is formed, lord knows how many times that freaking happened. Let's see if the story stays it's course. I really hope it does T-T

Now we getting into the good stuff. Can’t wait for Naruto to come and kick the OCRs group ass and save her before death