I can’t belive this story is over. Hell I can’t believe it only has 8 reviews! Well, 9 now. Anyway, I LOVED every part of this, I thought it fit Shiro perfectly, and honestly I think I’m currently going through The White Paladin withdrawal. As for a sequel or something of the like, ABSOLUTELY YES PLEASE. Also I may have teared up slightly during this last chapter and... well yeah that’s the tea. Well, the coffee. That Adam was clutching... *sobs*

OH FUCK

dreamboat was so hilariously fitting and funny

Yes please at least an epilogue

This was an amazing read. I enjoyed it all. The only thing I would critique is that the ending feels a little rushed and lacking in that umph that you started with and an epilogue may help! I do feel that having another chapter devoted to Shiro as he takes on the leadership roll as the head of Voltron, while reflecting on his life and condition, would be good. But I understand you want Adam's reaction to the crash as well.

Please note that your writing is amazing, beautiful, and capable of building such abstract and striking imagery and I only make such a suggestion because I feel it may be the cherry on top for such an awesome piece.

This review is only my personal opinion and selfish desire! I hope you keep writing.

Awesome

Damn... That was an intense chapter. I really love your characterization of Shiro and Keith’s relationship and it only gets better every chapter

Shiro is white 白
Shirogane is platnuim 白金
Its a combonation of white and gold

This is a really good story. This seems like the perfect build up to making Shiro into the Paladin we learn he becomes. Can’t wait to see more