Wait wait wait wait-
Soos? Soos is a flippin' Mad Scientist?

What has the world come to-

Holy hell this is good. Can't wait to see more!

Bruuuhhh good chapter! Soos might b my favorite so far cause he's really funny in a super weird way. Can't wait to see more!

Please tell me this hasn't been abandoned! Just finished binging and really hope there's more

I think it's kind of funny how he's going to pull the trigger on the handgun only to have it click. That'd be awkward

That was intense. I could feel the tension and fear when Sean was whispering to Dipper. I really like this chapter and the story as a whole! Amazing work!

This story literally just keeps getting better. That chapter was AMAZING! AND HORRIFYING! I like the twist with josh and Mary and what her name, but don't let it get too cliche. Some of the characters were a little sidelined to make room for all the perfect and gory descriptions, but it wasn't bad, it worked. I REALLY want to know what will happen next, this story has me so freakin hooked. Keep up the great work!'

That pinecest hit me like a fuckin bullet man. Keep up the good work. Just BTW, when can we expect the next chapter? Thanks!

Excited for more! :)

Great chapter!

PINECEST INCOMING!
*KABOOM*

This was a really good chapter, this story just keeps greeting darker and darker! I didn’t see the twist coming with Dipper and Mabel, and it’s cool to see Grunkle Stan have a sense of familiarity and that the world wasn’t also like that. I can’t wait to see what’s you do next!

I really liked this chapter, and it was very well written... I do hope that the pinecest thing ain't gonna last tho. I don't wanna attack anybody's ship, but I think it's gross. I do like that he isn't treating his sister like total shit anymore, and Stan was really interesting in this chapter. He knows on some level that this isn't the real world. Overall, great chapter.

I love it!

oh btw the last review was me, oops