Are you continuing this or what?

Continue please! Maybe make the couples swap?

Brittany and Theodore please

Jeanette is feeling it now.

Excellent work, my good man.

This story is really good, I look forward to the next chapter.

Alvin And Jennette please

You,d better continue soon because we all love it but no pregnant girls ok

the story has such death to it. it's much more than a mature level story the story has great flow and very well written

This story is awesome, I look forward to the next chapter

this story has been very well written. This chapter I have enjoyed. I can relate to this chapter on a personal level. Some of the instances between Eleanor and Theodore I have personally experienced. so which makes me believe that certain situations are very common. the situation being Eleanor feeling that Fedor does not think she is beautiful. Whereas Theodore nose that she is beautiful. great job keep writing can't wait to read more you have done a wonderful job

well written story. I certinaly would like a second chapter.

Hot damn. Pretty nice read here from start to finish, though it's kinda tough to tell which version of the munks are being used.

Other than that, not much to say. A pretty enjoyable read, and that accidentally sent vid is gonna cause a stir. Wonder what'll happen next?

KRS, Out!

Great story so far. Well done

Gosh this story is freaking hot. Could you please make more lemon stories:)