Reviews for Let's Take It From The Top
EDelta88 chapter 21 . 11/18/2019
Huh... you know, it would make sense to release and purify the corruption over time. Sneaky
Stalking Fan chapter 21 . 10/17/2019
NOOOOOO! there isn't a sequel. *sad face* tho I did read on a thread on spacebattles that Nooroo could be the actual evil one. suggesting things like "kick cat in the balls before taking his ring" and "THIS IS HOW YOU PROPERLY VILLAIN!"

Poor Gab. I hope everyone recognizes the fact that Nooroo is now evil and don't blame Gab for Hawk Moth. If I didn't have too many stories I might write teh sequel.
Owl Writer chapter 21 . 2/13/2019
This was fantastic. One of the best (if not the best) things I have ever read in this fandom.
Mermain123 chapter 21 . 1/29/2019
I LOVED THIS FROM BEGINING TO END! I WAS LEFT WANTING MORE AFTER EVERY CHAPTER AND NEEDED TO SEE WHAT WOLD HAPPEN NEXT! Iundersand if you don't want to continue and i won't beg for you too. it would be nice but that's on you
i love all the alternatives. firefly was awsome and i love how you brought her back in the end.
i love how mylene became essentially stoneheart but also super good.
nightingale was perfect for ms bustier.
i love how everyone (with i guess the exception of gabe but i sure as hell aint complaining) was very in character and how everyone had to face the consequences of their actions! i was worried the wish was going to make this universe the cannon universe (i saw that in another story and while i was cool then it's the sort of twist i think only works once)
i love how adorable mari and adrien were. and i can't blame adrien for completly falling for mari like that because she's super amazing and anyone would. and i love to go back to the scene where she tells him she know his identity. i also like how gabe is pretty much ready to adopt marinette after just meeting her once as hawkmoth and firefly.
so much love to give this story i can't comprehend it all.
deletedaccount3291048190 chapter 21 . 1/22/2019
Okay, I don't even know how late I am commenting this, but WHAT DID I STUMBLE INTO HERE?!
This is a book! Of art at its purest, most incredible, possible formactually, scratch that; it goes a long bit BEYOND the "possible" barrier.
I'm astonished. You tied all the loose ends together marvelously well and kept the story flowing at a perfectly natural pace.
Thank you for writing and robbing many of my nights of sleep with your well-crafted quips and pinpointed cliffhangers. Now that I've finished reading this one, I look forward to reading more from you!
Amity Pines chapter 21 . 1/21/2019
I loved this story so much! There are no words to describe how fantastic this experience has been. Your writing style is actually a lot like mine (now rather than the last time I wrote fanfic because goodness that was horrid). That said, you make a lot of the same mistakes as I do. You tend to overuse exclamation points and the caps lock key. When this occurs, these tools start to lose their meaning. They pack a lot more punch when used sparingly.
On the positive side, the ending really got me. I had completely expected the story to end with the wish resetting everything and leading into the actual show. It's awfully refreshing to read an ending that completely takes me by surprise.
Anyhow, keep on writing and keep on improving. You have quite a lot of potential.
Sn0wk1tty chapter 21 . 1/20/2019
I want to say, “THANK YOU”, for creating such a great story! This was a blast to read and look forward to! The ending was really something!
Song of Shadow chapter 21 . 1/18/2019
I cannot believe this story got an "ehh" response. Seriously, this fic was just AMAZING! I guess most people prefer your stories where the main premise is Marinette and Adrien falling in love, but
1: this story still had plenty of love square (or pentagon) fluff, and
2: the STORY of this fic was amazing!
I mean, I liked the beginning; the premise was interesting, and I love the interactions of the characters. Then it just kept getting better! I loved Nightingale, then I loved Black Raven, and then I LOVED the whole thing with /everyone/ fighting Nathalie... and THEN there was this chapter. I was expecting a nice chapter with drama and such, ending with someone making the wish, and maybe some angst as they dealt with the consequenses of the wish, but then you did all that and MORE with all those sequel teasers. And now you're telling me you're probably not going to write the sequel? :(
I really don't think this review does justice to such an amazing story, but I just wanted you to know how much I enjoyed reading it. (Seriously, I can. not. believe that this would be considered an "ehh" fic. It was amazing.)
Kaggy-Higgs88 chapter 21 . 1/18/2019
I loved this story, and what you did with it! I do hope eventually you look into using your ending as an open doorway for a sequel, but if not I do look forward to reading your future stories. Keep up the good work!
horseg27 chapter 21 . 1/17/2019
Then ending, man! I, for one, would be fully on board for a sequel and will be eager to read if, should you ever decide to go through with it. :)
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this with your many numerous twists to the cannon. Poor Gabriel though, and by extension Adrien and Nathalie. He tried so hard, only to be unable to escape his fate as Hawk Moth. At least all's well, that mostly ends well ;P
Potatoeprincess chapter 21 . 1/16/2019
I loved it, absolutely loved the story idea. I have read other fanfics where something bad happens to on of the main characters, usually chat noir, but i have never read anything like this, thank you for that. While I can say that I would love a sequel this was amazing, and I can't wait to read your next story.
Scotius chapter 21 . 1/16/2019
Eh, haters gonna hate. I for one, like this AU very much. It was interesting, fun read with good characterisation of well known characters. And some new elements - Nice!Gabriel FTW LOL And last but not least - not so many secrets! Seriously - people in Miraculous universe are the most oblivious, blind, unaware persons around. With so many hints main characters keep throwing around, i find it mind-boggling no one figured out biggest secrets so far. Sheesh. Your approach was far more realistic and believable, while still entertaining. Anyway, i gobbled up this story in like, two days - and i will happily read the sequel, if you ever write it of course. I hope you will :)
mareed0389 chapter 21 . 1/16/2019
Wow! That's one heck of a finish! I personally adored this story and am glad to have been able to read it. If you do come back to this AU I'd be happy to read it.
TearsOfPaper chapter 21 . 1/16/2019
That was incredible. I’m sorry to hear you won’t be continuing with the story you left wide open, but I loved what you did with everything. Amazing job!
Books chapter 21 . 1/16/2019
This fanfic is amazing, but I'm curious, what could evil Nooroo possibly want? Oh, and you totally need to do a sequel.
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