Whoa...Valentine has Garrett, interesting. Ha! "I can't get pregnant" is the most famous soap phrase for a bun is in the oven, miracle pregnancy. Should be interesting but, I'd have to see Jason be more of a father to his two existing kids now as well if that is where you are going and can script it. Kellie's kids have had her full attention so they might adjust better but Danny and Jake still haven't had an all in Jason and not only would they have share his time with Kellie's kids but a new sibling as well. Look forward to the next book/installment

I bet Kellie is pregnant after all. Excited to read the next story. You are great writer. I hope there even more romance in next story and more family time for Kellie Jason and kids.

:) Great chapter. Can’t wait to see what happens next. I love these two together.

Man this chapter is intense. Alyssa is a hot mess and a handful.

Very nice chapter. I'm kind of sad this one is coming to and end and definitely you have me hooked for the next. Very nice ending in this chapter with Jase and Kellie. I also very much liked the Liz/Kellie convo on the sleep over and how they resolved it for now. Although have to say the first thought in my head is too stinking bad for Jason he can just suck it up because Kellie and he have their own enemies that clearly her daughter got caught in the cross fire and who is to say Jake wouldn't if he is with them on a sleep over at their home. Off my soap box now. I don't like Franco but sometimes Alpha male Jason irritates me.

OMG Is Kellie pregnant?

Jake and Jason - Yea - I am a big Carly fan, the women have come and gone, Carly always stays by his side.

I only see them as friends however.

Very nice update. I like that Jason and Jake are getting some dad/son time. Loved the Liz/Kellie conversation, Thank you again for utilizing Elizabeth in a fair and kind manner. Nice convo with Kellie/Carly too. Nice to Jason actually voice that he would back up what Kellie says to Carly, rather then simply patting Carly on the head and just tell her to stop, knowing she wont ala GH. Your writing is so much better. Also, good convo with Monica. Well, now that you have set the hook on Kellie's dream being in your next story, I can't wait for that to start. Look forward to the next chapter.

Very good chapter. I feel badly for Lorenzo. Interesting on Kellie's dream being different and there being another little girl to rescue. Not sure if you are taking that somewhere or it was simply just a dream. Kellie/Jase convo of course very sweet. I have to say even Sonny is trying to be a good dad. I could almost really like your version of this character, pity that I hold a very nasty bitter grudge against the fictional soap version. Maybe it will change for your story we will see. That all said, I look forward to your next update.

Very good chapter and worth the wait. Look forward to the next update.

please update

love Epiphany Maybe you can write what happened to Jason since the show will not.

Really good chapter. Love that kellie was the first one with Jason and able to get through to him. Love how Jason knew right away that kellie was buzzed and their honest conversation. Epiphany is always a welcome addition.

Really nice chapter. I really liked that Kellie could bring Jason back to reality and there conversation. Truthful, direct and no judgment. Oh how I wish a different Jason pairing got this level of writing on GH. But, it didn't so I am just going to have to continue enjoying it with Kellie in this story. Good job and look forward to another chapter.

Great chapter. I just love epiphany. She tells it like she sees it. I like that Jason & Kellie finally admitted they love each other about damn time. Looking forward to reading what happens next.