Please update when you can.

I LOVE THIS

I’m sorry I tried to read this but I didn’t even make it half way. You’re just too sporadic and you introduced too many characters at once, who somehow know about the multiverse and are magical. I was just too confused to continue.

Anorith is bug/rock type pyroar is normal fire type

Hi!
This one is not related to ur story but i want to know want u think of this idea*grins*
#fem allen(dgrayman) due to him having nea and an innocence (lets say it's a male) turn to a boy might be due to a seal or something and when somehow nea is rip out of him he turn back into a girl (name nel hehehe) and nea is protective of her and her innocence also can turn to human form and quite protective...(also can be due to amethyst in one of her pregnant troll swing) what do u think?
And allen having a long curly hair

This story is trying to add to many cross overs to quickly. Harry potter/ pokemon/ fate cross over in the first chapter alone.
I think i will drop this story because of that reason alone. A suggestion for you is to take you're time, and do not force to many cross overs in you're story without planning. Because you will run into the problem the first chapter of this story did.

Hello! I just finished reading this lovely fic and I must say. What a wonderful idea!
There are little plot holes and multiple things were explained really well. It's a good read.
The only thing that I see, this is not exactly a problem but, there is a Lot of just...poof.
I'm talking about having all these events happening all very close together with little warning of them actually changing. Normally, when writers do this, they make each event into there own section; sometimes in separate sections of chapters or just as separate chapters. They start at a beginning then end with an ending that can possibly relate to the next part after a Line Break. I have seen multiple people do it that way and I enjoyed reading it. I would still enjoy reading how you write if you decide to continue this Fantastic story but it does still feel really poofy. Good Job!

some grammar issues but an interesting fic so far

Uhh, wanting the Wizarding World to burn is kind of an overreaction. It's just the Dursleys, Voldemort, Dumbledore, Death Eaters (especially Wormtail and Snape) to blame. If you want to punish anyone, target them only.

Fate Stay Night crossover is weird, especially with their magic being a known thing. I've read a (Harry is) Giovanni and Team Rocket summoned by Goblet of Fire fic so I can get behind that. I wonder if there are any fics where Harry is Red? I think that'd be cool, though Red is like mute so maybe not...

great story. update more please!

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

Its well written but this is a clusterfuck of a story

this is an awesome story! hope that there will be more insanity and chaos to come!

This fic is pure insanity and I love it!

And the reference to sakurademonalchemist's Golden Queen was a nice touch (really wish he finishes that story and updates others)

awesome