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atta boy heuy

Y'know, I made a post on Tumblr about how I really wanted Dewey's choices on that plane to effect the boys and for it to be addressed- in really glad someone did use it. The entire story was great and I totally agree that anger is a very hard feeling to portray/write about. You did a great job with this! Great characterization, it worked amazingly together!

Awwwwww.
I loved this whole thing

This was EMOTIONAL. LOUIE. YOU POOR BABY. ;-; I’ve never really been able to connect with Louie, but OH I LOVE HIM IN THIS. MY SMALL DUCK CHILD. I’M HAPPY DONALD HUGGED HIM.

You did an excellent job writing, describing, and expressing the annoying/frustrating emotion that is known as “anger” in this chapter. - Well done! Kudos!

KUDOOOOOS!

I like this story. Its so cute! I think Donald is really underratted, which is disappointing. I was also disappointed in The Shadow War, at the end Donald wasn't given credit for saving Duckberg, like the rest was. Because of that, I binged Fanfic that included him, haha! This story was good, it potraited Donald being their parents figure, which i liked. Keep up the good work. )

I absolutely loved this chapter! It was amazing! Louie has always been my little favorite baby. I write him as VERY clingy and affectionate in my stories, but that’s just me. I love how Louie is with Donald! It’s so incredibly adorable! I love it so much! I loved reading this!

This chapter was beautiful, it's nice to try to understand emotions and write ir down. You achieve in a greater way
Pd: i'm afraid, my Louie :"

Ohh Foreshadowing.

I love this ending. Great foreshadowing of what is going to happen without going into detail. And in general great story.

I've been looking for a good fit after that last episode and this one is perfect! I love that you have Donald all the credit he deserves for being a good parent.

I hope there's some sweet brother moments too later! Update soon :)

Okey...Louie's done a runner. To uncle Scrooge perhaps? Only to be interupted by Webby? We'll see, Roxy

Yeah. I agree with the whole anger is hard to write for thing. That’s why most of my stories aren’t really much of that. I do have some that have some anger though.

Lou Lou is my favorite as well! I love them all, and Dewey is a close second, but the baby of the triplets is the most adorable, sweet, little child!

This chapter was pretty good. I’m scared about Louie though! Keep up the good work!