Jack is more of a parent than Petunia and Vernon. Good Lord.

Well, this was certainly interesting. I didn’t quite expect the ending, but it worked. Nice job :)

Cute, very cute...a little odd though but I liked it very much nonetheless.

I somehow hoped they would let move Jack to somewhere at Privet Drive so that Harry had a nice person there. And that they would let him remember that he took them and decided to let them go and apologize

Real sweet story! Is Jack some sort of audience surrogate? I feel like most of us have wanted to protect Harry at some point or other. That said, I don't think he was a Gary Stu- he certainly had flaws that he worked on (I mean, kidnapping two boys? Really?) and his motivations weren't always the most noble, but he was definitely an interesting character.
Thanks for writing!

A very nice little story. Thank you

Interesting story. I really enjoyed it, thanks for sharing.

Too bad most readers priorities are screwed up. Your story is only semi popular due to the mention of girls rather then how good the story actually is.

The story is pretty rushed though but then again perhaps different POV is not your thing.

Why didn't Harry just go to the lobby and get help there?

Oh that's kind of sad that he doesn't remember anything,but I like how it ended.I have to say I've read a lot of HP Fanfics in my time but I've never read one like 10 points to whatever house you're in for originality :D

Haha, I can just imagine Dudley and Harry meeting up after years, with their wives and Dudley saying, upon meeting Ginny, "I knew you would date her eventually!":D

I love it!

It's shame how things ended especially with hoa fond of harry jack was. But I liked the story it was well written.

Very interesting. I like the way your mind works.

Thanks for writing! -"-

Good story. It's been a few years since you wrote it but I enjoyed it.